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Step by step Flirt by flirt Dance by dance The sky advanced Slant and twirl In eye curl Wild sea gull Desire glanced Sailing ships Blossoming lips Freedom fission Moments danced Smile by smile Conquering miles Into the Nile I’m entranced _______________________________ 8/12/2016

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Date: 12/30/2016 10:28:00 AM
I really liked this piece. It jumped out at me as I was starting to look a bit deeper into some work. Look forward to reading more. Forrest
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/30/2016 11:31:00 AM
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Date: 12/29/2016 5:26:00 AM
You left so much unsaid that me thinks you have been a naughty boy. Excellent topic. Very sexy
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/29/2016 6:01:00 AM
ha ha .. the contest theme did this ... not me ...
Date: 12/15/2016 6:35:00 AM
I love this! Saying much with few words. It also has a beat to it.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/16/2016 8:21:00 AM
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Date: 12/10/2016 6:22:00 PM
Very enchanting poem, Probir. I really like the rhythm of this poem. Cool romanticism. Must be the lover in you. Love the poem though. Love and peace to you.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/11/2016 12:03:00 AM
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Date: 12/10/2016 1:22:00 PM
Excellent, congrats!
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Date: 12/11/2016 12:03:00 AM
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Date: 12/10/2016 11:26:00 AM
It has its own upbeat tempo, flirting with nature and beyond. Congrats.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/11/2016 12:04:00 AM
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Date: 12/9/2016 6:27:00 PM
I really liked it Probir :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/9/2016 7:52:00 PM
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Date: 12/9/2016 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations Probir. It's entrancing.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/9/2016 9:18:00 AM
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Date: 12/9/2016 6:02:00 AM
Well done, Probir! Congratulations! ... Fran
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/9/2016 9:18:00 AM
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Date: 12/9/2016 4:04:00 AM
Congratulations Probir :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/9/2016 4:54:00 AM
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Date: 12/8/2016 9:39:00 PM
A super cool flirt write Probir, thank you for entering, congratulations on your win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/9/2016 12:29:00 AM
Thank you for the sponsorship and consideration ... Glad you liked it ....
Date: 12/8/2016 3:16:00 PM
- Enjoy reading this, lovely Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/8/2016 8:32:00 PM
Thank you, Anne ...
Date: 12/8/2016 7:28:00 AM
Lovely, Probir. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/8/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, Agnes ...
Date: 12/8/2016 7:20:00 AM
Lovely, Probir! Saving as a favorite! 7+
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/8/2016 8:25:00 AM
Thank you, Kim ...
Date: 12/7/2016 8:50:00 PM
Beautiful and seductive, Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/7/2016 11:16:00 PM
Thank you ...