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Flickering Shadows

Sunshine streamed in through the windows on a slant. As she flipped long curly red locks off her shoulder. She took the other road most often. The road less traveled. Why ? Because that's how she liked it. Only because she liked the curves in the road. There was a time or two she wondered about the light flickering at the other end. But she always had hope in her eyes. At times it did not matter whether or not someone was by her side. Though she did prefer to be connected. Alas, it couldn't be with just any soul. She's always been a free spirit. Such as the gypsies of old. Coming in with the autumn leaves. Just as she left on a summers day. In the quiet of her flickering shadows 3 / 3 / 2014 Monday

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Date: 5/1/2017 3:13:00 PM
I saw this one three years ago and it remains one of your very best, Debbie.
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Date: 8/29/2015 10:01:00 PM
I like this. You've created a beautiful sense of the mysterious Thanks.
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Date: 8/12/2015 8:12:00 PM
"Because that's how she liked it. Only because she liked the curves in the road."I love those lines...I can kinda relate to her...this is stunning work, and I love the expressions therein. "At times it did not matter whether or not someone was by her side." She's got that unique spirit anyone can appreciate. Always, Laura
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Date: 2/24/2015 7:55:00 PM
Intriguing, magical poem. Thank you for sharing these images.
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Date: 1/19/2015 1:49:00 PM
What a marvelous piece of poetry..I like the curves in the road with the flickering light at the end...C--->A
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Date: 6/8/2014 7:56:00 PM
Well done, my friend - another gem!
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Date: 5/25/2014 5:15:00 PM
Wonderful poem... Sooo very well written... Your images held me there with her.
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Date: 4/25/2014 8:35:00 AM
Fantastic poem. Your images speak of the romance and beauty found in the freedom of following your own soul.
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Date: 4/19/2014 6:31:00 PM
I love the romanticism associated with gypsies and freedom. This is just perfect!
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Date: 4/19/2014 1:43:00 PM
I love this poem. I can relate so well to this free spirit who wants to go her own way. This is a really beautiful write, Debbie! I am going to be adding this to my favorites!...Thank you very much for the nice comments. I do appreciate it! :)
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Date: 3/29/2014 3:19:00 PM
Beautiful piece Debbie!
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/29/2014 7:47:00 PM
Thank you Keith :)
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/29/2014 3:52:00 PM
Thank you Keith :)
Date: 3/28/2014 7:09:00 PM
I really enjoyed this write Love: But she always had hope in her eyes. but also the gypsy: Such as the gypsies of old. Coming in with the autumn leaves. Just as she left on a summers day. Seems some part of poet is gypsy...not all poets but some. I never liked being called a gypsy but then can hardly deny the title Nice clean write
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Date: 3/16/2014 2:09:00 PM
Debbie :) It was nice to see your poem featured in the poetry soups, home page this past week. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2014 10:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Read and enjoyed it, debbie
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Date: 3/11/2014 10:28:00 AM
Debbie, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/8/2014 6:13:00 AM
Unencumbered ties that bind, the kind of ties the soul don't mind. Two kindred spirits free by themselves. Enjoying life down off the shelves. Hope your feeling rested Debbie. :) Been awhile. Good to see ya' back. Peace. :)
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Date: 3/7/2014 8:22:00 AM
amazing poetry. I do believe this is one of your very best. Now keep going and do some more!!!
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/7/2014 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Andrea :)
Date: 3/7/2014 3:26:00 AM
- A really beautiful poem Debbie, although there are shadows in life - it's all about "seeing the sun" and the happiness .... - Pleased to read your work. - Thank you and have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/7/2014 6:33:00 AM
Thank you Anne :)
Date: 3/6/2014 11:13:00 PM
Ah, I've missed your work! YAY! It's great to see you around. =) I embrace "curves" with the greatest of smiles. This was intense.
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Date: 3/6/2014 11:46:00 PM
I thank you Drake :)
Date: 3/6/2014 2:27:00 PM
Lovely. Free spirits have shadows too...they come and they go along unusual paths. // paul
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Debbie Duncan
Date: 3/6/2014 11:46:00 PM
thank you Paul :)

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