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Fishing With Grandpa

I feel it tugging Hanging on - It must be huge! Bluegill, smiles, grandpa Haiku - For Sara Kendrick's "A Pleasant Childhood Memory" Contest

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Daver Austin

Date: 9/1/2015 11:41:00 AM

Cute and joy filled. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Lisa Cooper

Date: 12/20/2012 1:41:00 PM

awesome imagery. I remember fishin' with my brother, my grandpa lived too far away!

Nina Mindova

Date: 12/19/2012 3:06:00 AM

I SOMETIMES WRITE CRITICS. NICE TO MEET YOU

Shawn Sackman
Date: 12/19/2012 11:47:00 AM

nice to meet you, too! i just read and commented on your 'my beloved.." poem. it is really good. shawn

Nina Mindova

Date: 12/19/2012 3:05:00 AM

HELLO.I AM TEACHER NINA MINDOVA. NICE TO MEET YOU. I SOMETIMES WRITE.I AM FROM BULGARIA.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/17/2012 3:21:00 PM

I see my niece posted a comment on this poem.. I hope you did not mind me loaning here my space to read a few poems. Here's a thought from me. This is a great haiku. i love the fun and interesting image you are spending with your pa'. lovely childhood memory.. xox~LINDA

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/21/2012 9:05:00 AM

I loved it too! Happy Turkey Day! Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2012 3:39:00 AM

A big one.....like it Shawn. - Wish you luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2012 3:40:00 PM

Hi,Shawn your poem is cool hope to read another one of your poems}i{Today I'm reading poems from my aunt PD's account, hope you don't mind. Sincerely pd's niece SYLVIA;}

Karen Deeks

Date: 6/4/2012 1:04:00 AM

A fine example of a worthwhile writing form... great visuals laid by so few words... bravo...