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First Lovers Glance

So cloyingly allusive and eagerly timid!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/8/2011 6:53:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “Sounds Sooo Enticingly Seductive My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Laura! *^_^* Dear John Told Myself That Your Lovely Beauty Is Italian &, I Love That *^_^* Something About A Lady With Italian Blood Running Through Her Veins & Nature *^_^* I Find Its Reflection Amid This Wonderful Verse Somehow Someway, My Dear!” === My Love, Always, Jasper *
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Date: 6/4/2010 12:34:00 PM
Thanx Laura for ur comment and wish :) on my poem Summer at 8pm.
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Date: 4/29/2010 6:28:00 PM
All the questions that rage in the mind after that first glance! Will they or will they not. We never know until we ask! Loved this one.
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Date: 4/25/2010 11:53:00 AM
Love the vocab! Congradulations!!! -Destiny
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Date: 4/24/2010 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "First Love" Laura. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/24/2010 10:52:00 AM
vert nice congrats faleshia
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Date: 4/24/2010 10:51:00 AM
Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara Kendrick
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Date: 4/24/2010 7:37:00 AM
Very original, Laura. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/23/2010 11:24:00 PM
congratulations Laura, nice image here...Margaret
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Date: 4/23/2010 8:56:00 PM
Congratulations, laura. This is very descriptive!
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Date: 4/23/2010 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Laura...As usual...never disappointing!! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 4/23/2010 5:54:00 PM
You have me smiling with this one. Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 4/23/2010 5:08:00 PM
Congrats Laura on your success in my "First Love" contest with this sweet Epigram ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:19:00 PM
A very fine expression. Good luck
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Date: 4/22/2010 8:03:00 PM
Wow, I really like the innocence in this poem- NICE!
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