First Kiss

Tree leaves turning red The same color as your face The first time we kissed

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Roger Turner

Date: 5/12/2018 2:50:00 PM

short and sweet. love this.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/3/2015 9:36:00 AM

Lovely memory brought on by the red leaves. Your first kiss and introductory offering on Soup are impressive. // paul

Md Johnson
Date: 5/4/2015 10:56:00 AM

Thank you for the very nice compliment. I appreciate your visits.

Anastasia Denny

Date: 4/11/2015 10:47:00 PM

Reminds me of my first kiss full of magic and it was amazing how bad I blushed

Md Johnson
Date: 4/17/2015 11:23:00 AM

Yes...nice memories to have. Thank you for reading.

Skat A

Date: 4/4/2015 8:10:00 PM

MICHAEL, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Md Johnson
Date: 4/4/2015 11:47:00 PM

Thank you for the nice welcome to Poetry Soup.

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/30/2015 5:59:00 PM

First kiss in Autumn...lovely memories about your loved one's face, too. Nice jux on your haiku. Welcome to PoetrySoup, Michael. Kim :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2015 11:55:00 AM

you are welcome

Anastasia Denny

Date: 3/29/2015 9:35:00 AM

I love this, it reminds me of my first kiss

Md Johnson
Date: 3/30/2015 10:34:00 AM

I'm happy you enjoy it. Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/29/2015 9:34:00 AM

- A small greeting and warm welcome, Michael D.:) - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here at the P- Soup - Looking forward to read many poems from you in the future - // Anne-Lise :)

Md Johnson
Date: 3/30/2015 10:33:00 AM

Thank you for the greeting and welcome.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/27/2015 11:07:00 PM

about the haiku. I think it's very sweet to remember everything about your first kiss. Love the imagery and comparison. Love LINDA

Md Johnson
Date: 3/28/2015 9:26:00 AM

Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/27/2015 11:05:00 PM

Michael, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Md Johnson
Date: 3/28/2015 9:22:00 AM

Thank you for the welcome. Yes, I welcome constructive feedback. I know that I am not very skilled but I do enjoy this beautiful form of expression.