Fireworks

FIREWORKS The initial joy Of a firework Is not in the sparkle shower But at the exact moment of BURST! Something in one’s very bones Recalls creation Life proclaiming self A coming out of the gigantic And won’t unfoldment be beautiful Dave Austin

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2016 4:04:00 PM

Using cell phone today for comments. I hate it wish me luck! Thanks for reading me.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/16/2016 4:08:00 PM

A lovely piece. love phyl

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 7/15/2016 10:36:00 AM

You have a special insight into situations that other people cannot see, well described x

Daver Austin
Date: 7/16/2016 10:23:00 AM

Thanks for the visit and kind words. Now I must visit you. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2016 9:07:00 AM

aha, so YOUR Levine is a different one!! Have a nice day, my friend. I can't believe it is already Friday.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2016 9:06:00 AM

I love this one, Daver. As for Levine the dog. It was named after Adam Levine. Do you know that guy? famous singer and one of the judges for the Voice!

Daver Austin
Date: 7/12/2016 10:26:00 AM

No.I have played with James Levine, conductor of the Metropolitan Opera - a very long time ago. Love, Dave

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/10/2016 5:09:00 PM

Interesting theme daver, love the message, and oh so clever the meaning..

Judy Ball

Date: 7/7/2016 10:13:00 AM

WoW! I never looked at it like that. Great insight here. Beautifully written and well expressed. A seven from m3e. God Bless and sorry it took so long for me to get back to you. Been gone awhile and just got back to my puter. Trying to catch up. JB

Daver Austin
Date: 7/7/2016 12:01:00 PM

Thanks for the visit, Judy. love, daver

Phillip Garcia

Date: 7/4/2016 11:56:00 AM

This unfoldment was beautiful. Enjoyed it, thank you for posting it

Daver Austin
Date: 7/4/2016 12:15:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and a happy 4th to you. Love, daver