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Firefly

Fairy lights of insects Fascinate the senses Flaring in the nighttime Feel the magic moment Filagree wings in flight Flitting in a bright dance Free flow sparks of wonder. Written on 9/12/2023

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Date: 10/8/2023 6:21:00 PM
Wow. I love this one Laura: Into my favs. It is beautiful. SuZ
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Laura Leiser
Date: 10/9/2023 9:13:00 AM
Thank you, Suzanne! So glad you liked this one, and thanks for the fave! :)
Date: 9/23/2023 1:55:00 PM
The last line is my favorite. Wonderful poem and belated congrats!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/24/2023 9:22:00 PM
Thank you, Karen! Glad you liked this one. :)
Date: 9/18/2023 7:09:00 AM
This is a delightful, well written Pleiades Laura. Beautiful, chosen words. ‘Flitting in a bright dance, Free flow sparks of wonder’. Just wonderful. Really enjoyed it. Many congratulations on your worthy win. :):)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/19/2023 5:45:00 PM
Thanks so much, Christina. Glad you liked this one! :)
Date: 9/15/2023 3:23:00 PM
Very much enjoyed this, Laura. Congrats on your win
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/19/2023 5:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, Terry! :)
Date: 9/14/2023 7:11:00 PM
We had such fun catching them. A wondeful reminder
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2023 7:30:00 PM
Thank you, Situation. :)
Date: 9/14/2023 10:45:00 AM
- It's magical, Laura ... lovely written :) - Congrats on your win :) - hugs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2023 6:58:00 PM
Thanks so much as always, Anne-Lise! :)
Date: 9/14/2023 7:09:00 AM
Wow! Brilliant, Laura, congratulations:)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2023 6:58:00 PM
Thanks so much, Joanna. I’m glad you liked this one! :)
Date: 9/14/2023 6:55:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning well deserved win really. I especially love “ filagree wings in flight” “ fitting in a bright dance” ah so very creative how you’ve done this pleiades. So glad i saw this. Congratulations. A new fave for me
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2023 6:57:00 PM
You are too kind, Ink Impress! I thank you for the high praise and fave! :)
Date: 9/14/2023 6:55:00 AM
Wonderful write Laura, Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/14/2023 6:51:00 AM
I saw so many with similar words, but yours is so unique and different.. I love this one, you used the theme so well..
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2023 6:57:00 PM
Thank you, Silent! I’m so happy you enjoyed my little poem! :)
Date: 9/13/2023 7:07:00 AM
Laura, this is a wonderful, lovely, creative piece! Janice
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/14/2023 6:55:00 PM
Thank you, Janice! So happy you liked this! :)
Date: 9/12/2023 12:51:00 PM
Whimsical poetry Laura. Fireflies titillate and fascinate, young and old. Have a great day
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/12/2023 3:30:00 PM
Thank you, Tom, for commenting. :) Hope you are doing well.