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Fire and Ice Love Duel

"Fire and Ice Love Duel" fierce fire of love smoldered, melting chilled veins frozen in tears from passion's masquerade game a grieving heart shattered as glass windowpanes ressurected by lovelight's intimate flame. fire sparks lovers to trust words so gentle as ice quells desires strong and sentimental. elements contrast and hide deep affection creates 'paradise' or blatant rejection. ***** while embers glow softly, emotions renewed scars from dark past wither into furnace heat remnants of romance lost in feelings askewed as tenderness begs to deny false repeat. fire illuminates a wanton seared soul for fire evokes magic moments to whole. veniers of ice vanish in vapory mist swallowed by love duel's eternal exist. ***** *For Carol Sunshine Brown's Fire and Ice Contest. *Written by: Linda-Marie The "Sweetheart" of P.S. *Nov. 18, 2012.

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Date: 3/13/2014 3:24:00 AM
I love everything about this poem... SKAT
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Date: 3/10/2013 1:06:00 PM
This is a lovely write, and a winner I see. Deservedly so :-)...Love Ruby xxx
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Date: 12/19/2012 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Linda-M! love/hugs, LG
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Date: 12/19/2012 2:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Linda love xx
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Date: 12/19/2012 2:42:00 AM
An excellent write!! Congrats my friend Linda-Marie on your winning poem. Cheers and Good day always!! Hugs, Maria
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Date: 12/19/2012 1:23:00 AM
WON 3RD PLACE .. THANKXX..
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Date: 12/18/2012 8:42:00 PM
Linda my sweet bff, 2 perceived opposite meanings when it comes to "FIRE And ICE" :-) Congratulations with your winning poem In , Carol's contest... goodnight~ PD
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Date: 12/18/2012 4:57:00 PM
love's duel's eternal... great theme, linda. Big congrats in the contest, and just wanting to see you over here to wish you a good Christmas season. ARe you doing anything special this week. I got my new cat today. Waiting for her to become completely adjusted so I can get lots of cuddles. I saw her over at the original owner's house and she's an affectionate cat, all glossy black and with gold eyes.
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Date: 12/18/2012 1:50:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations on your placement Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2012 9:08:00 PM
A beautiful poem for the contest. I loved it and wish you luck. Lucilla
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Date: 11/22/2012 4:33:00 AM
Two thumbs up for another outstanding write my dear friend, Linda-M! Good luck for a big win! Happy and fruitful Thanksgiving Day to you and your family! love and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/20/2012 1:58:00 PM
just love this great write, my friend
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Date: 11/20/2012 1:45:00 PM
up there with your very best, Sweet Heart.. love this..
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Date: 11/19/2012 5:32:00 PM
Very nice Linda ,,,,, love the first stanza,,,, good luck on your win ;}
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Date: 11/19/2012 2:34:00 AM
It's a produce of love of Candy by fire and Ice duel. Wonderfully contrasted the both. Good luck always, bl
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Date: 11/19/2012 1:18:00 AM
Beautiful Linda. Loved your write. All the best for the contest.
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Date: 11/18/2012 6:51:00 PM
Wow, this is a wonderful, a perfect entry into Carol's contest my friend! I am rather amazed at the ease at which you portrayed the fire and ice with emotions between the two! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a harmonious and tremendous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/18/2012 6:41:00 PM
Awesome, Linda. I've got one for her but am waiting to put it up. It seems like you are doing ok here despite the problems, but gosh, you are right, in the old days you used to do even more. Hope you had a lovely day. Andrea
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Date: 11/18/2012 6:31:00 PM
THIS FIRE AND ICE THEME REMINDED ME O A LOVE DUEL IN ANCIENT TIMES .. SO HOPE U ALL ENJOY MY RISPETTO WORDS POETS ..LUV ..
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