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Finding Your Way

Finding Your Way On the beach are grains of sand, one will be of pure gold, but you cannot see it. In the field are stalks of grain, one is a perfect mutant, but you cannot find it. At yeshiva there is a learned child, smarter than the teachers, but they cannot recognize it. In the world there is reason to hope, the surface is all despair, but you cannot sense it. Inside you is happiness. You know not how to navigate, but you can find the path. See it, find it, recognize it, sense it, Only then you are on your way.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/13/2016 10:21:00 PM
Hi Seth, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
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Seth Diamond
Date: 7/21/2016 4:00:00 PM
Gee I'd really like your comment on my other poems too. The poems pertaining to my play script are noted act 2 ect, but the rest are wanting for comments.
Date: 5/8/2016 2:48:00 AM
SETH, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT
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Date: 5/1/2016 6:44:00 PM
I believe this is a beautiful write thank you for sharing please keep writing
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Seth Diamond
Date: 7/21/2016 4:00:00 PM
Gee I'd really like your comment on my other poems too. The poems pertaining to my play script are noted act 2 ect, but the rest are wanting for comments.
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Seth Diamond
Date: 5/1/2016 7:42:00 PM
Thank you! It would mean a lot to me to see comments from you on my other poems . I'd really appreciate it.

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