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listen with your eyes save your thoughts and remember patience descends if you wait giving all respect true joy is found in giving and you will be respected

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Date: 7/10/2020 7:23:00 PM
Very good life lesson
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Date: 9/19/2013 1:21:00 PM
Good comments here Tom, hope you and all yours are well; Joe..)
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Date: 9/8/2013 9:55:00 PM
good advise Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/7/2013 9:10:00 PM
Congrats Tom, in Debbie's awesome contest....... SKAT
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Date: 9/7/2013 8:04:00 PM
congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/7/2013 6:05:00 PM
What did your eyes hear? What does patience look like? smell like taste like, move toward .. showing. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Tom Larrow
Date: 9/7/2013 6:21:00 PM
Very good points, next time better. Thank you. Anata no kenkyona gakusei kara
Date: 9/7/2013 7:17:00 AM
Well done, congratulations.
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Tom Larrow
Date: 9/7/2013 6:23:00 PM
Thank you for reading
Date: 9/7/2013 5:45:00 AM
Congrats on the win
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Tom Larrow
Date: 9/7/2013 7:11:00 AM
Yasashi-sa no kotoba wa, watashi no sensei arigato - Thank you for reading
Date: 9/7/2013 4:45:00 AM
Good morning Tom, a wonderful and smooth win. gentle for the readers. ..luv. linda
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Tom Larrow
Date: 9/7/2013 5:15:00 AM
Uchi to soto de utsukushi josei to shijin ni kansha - Thank you for reading
Date: 9/6/2013 11:10:00 PM
you gotta love those Asian ways. So respectful. Congrats for the HM.
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Tom Larrow
Date: 9/7/2013 2:34:00 AM
doumo arigatou gozaimashita - thank you for reading
Date: 9/6/2013 3:05:00 PM
Congrats on your unique winning work..Sara
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Tom Larrow
Date: 9/7/2013 2:34:00 AM
doumo arigatou gozaimashita - thank you for reading
Date: 8/31/2013 8:44:00 AM
Please give ponce over to fourth line for less syllable if it is for the contest
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Tom Larrow
Date: 8/31/2013 1:00:00 PM
Thank you, I still saw 5 syllables but, a 2nd look made me rethink the wording. 5-7-7 5-7-7 is that correct for sedoka ?

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