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Festering Wound

The family ties are frayed by a festering wound The siblings are fighting over their parent’s will, The oldest brother a younger sister has impugned. As fighting continued, another sister was marooned Months have passed and the arguments rage still, The family ties are frayed by a festering wound. Threatening behavior, accusations, anger ballooned, Some children are refusing to pay the funeral bill, The oldest brother a younger sister has impugned. Several in-laws have found themselves lampooned, Although they have kept their hands out of the mill, The family ties are frayed by a festering wound. Sadly, the children and cousins are being groomed Even some family “friends” have come in for the kill The oldest brother a younger sister has impugned. Now, some have hired lawyers who are fine-tuned And anxious to get their greedy hands in the till, The family ties are frayed by a festering wound The oldest brother a younger sister has impugned. [Festering Wound]
FIRST PLACE WINNER Written March 4, 2022 Especially for “Pick-a-Title Vol. 29” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 3/28/2022 2:06:00 AM
An exceptional, sad, but true write, Milt; congratulations on your win.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/28/2022 7:55:00 AM
Thanks, Terry. Unfortunately, this is what happened very recently in my sister-in-law's family. So sad!
Date: 3/27/2022 10:53:00 PM
Great tragic family story beautifully said in Villanelle form. Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/28/2022 7:55:00 AM
Chris, I appreciate your read and your thoughts on my poem.
Date: 3/27/2022 11:25:00 AM
What an inspirational poem, you really excelled as expected in this writing, Milt. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Best regards
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/27/2022 12:17:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Lasaad. I always appreciate hearing from you and reading your affirmative comments. Have a wonderful Sunday!
Date: 3/27/2022 10:10:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this magnificent poem, Milt:-) I loved it!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/27/2022 10:33:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Edward. I always enjoy your contests, and I'm glad you liked this one.
Date: 3/6/2022 11:56:00 PM
The lawyers are always the winners in these sad cases of sibling rivalry, jealousy and greed.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/7/2022 8:51:00 AM
That is so true. And the anger and resentment lives on for years. Such a shame!

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