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Feline Top Ten

Lion the mighty king Stood shaking his mighty mane The tiger patiently slept Guarding his extreme right Elusive Amazonian jaguar Licked his paws in salute The leopard kneeled in front Smiling a sly smile Black panther flashed his teeth Glaring at the top spot The cheetah huffed and puffed Ready to resume the charge The predatory gleam rose In the caracal’s eyes The ocelot ate its meal Unaware of the completion The puma jumped forth Ready for the next round But the best ever title Went to my cat Prittle

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Date: 6/21/2011 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Adeleke's "Top Ten" contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/19/2011 3:45:00 PM
My congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Tahera
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Date: 6/19/2011 2:05:00 PM
Congrats Tahera my friend on a wonderful win in this top ten contest with this creative entry luv.. enjoy second place .. with luv..
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Date: 6/19/2011 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place with this delghtful top ten list. and congratulations to Prittle. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/19/2011 9:21:00 AM
I'm grateful for your support, congrats on your second place. Luv, Ade
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:47:00 PM
Very clever indeed. Is the top ten contest still going then? Gosh, this is really creative. Hope you score, Tahera!
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Date: 6/6/2011 3:07:00 AM
tahera, very cleverly written this one. Yes i am in hyderabad now. read all your new poems great going. hope your tabiyat is good now. take care...
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Date: 6/5/2011 6:40:00 AM
a RAWRRHing piece, tahera... i'm a fan of the feline species ( bobcat and savannah too)! love the ending.. :)best winning wishes with huggs, nette
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