Feather Boa

all eyes on me as boa hangs over my breast - center stage effect 14 July 2015 Feather Contest Sponsor: SKAT A image credit: gatsby1

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D.W. Rodgers

Date: 7/20/2015 7:12:00 AM

HI Kim, Congrats on your win and a well centered integration of senryu and image.

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/17/2015 10:38:00 PM

Great senryu, Kim! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/16/2015 2:48:00 PM

Loved your acute image and wishing you congratulation too. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Jan Terry

Date: 7/16/2015 11:33:00 AM

An article from the past with a contemporary theme a la Lady Gaga or Brittany Spears but I know your writings go even deeper. Congrats on your win, Kim. You are one of my favs. :) Janece

Paul Callus

Date: 7/16/2015 10:45:00 AM

You have many admirers here, Kim!:) Your provocative feather haiku is a winner on its own merits! Congratulations on a merited win! #7+ hugs // paul [missed out on this contest due to pressure of work.]

Jan Allison

Date: 7/16/2015 10:39:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/16/2015 9:48:00 AM

I love how each haiku takes us in a different direction !! This has a 'style' all its own !! Well done !!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/16/2015 8:25:00 AM

I love the visual you have left, Kim, a 7 and congratulations on your win. Hugs eve

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/16/2015 7:43:00 AM

Swinging back to offer congrats on your great win! Enjoyed the second read! Pandita

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/16/2015 4:36:00 AM

Wow, this is so clever Kim. It deserves top placement! Congratulations on your wonderful win! 7

Noel Villarosa

Date: 7/16/2015 2:47:00 AM

Congrats Kim on your impressive win. (^_^) Noel.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/16/2015 1:50:00 AM

Excellent. Enjoyed reading your vivid senryu. TFS

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2015 11:52:00 PM

ooh la la, Congratulations.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/15/2015 11:38:00 PM

Kim, I just stopped by tonight to say congratulations on your awesome win. :-)Alexis

Lycia Harding

Date: 7/15/2015 11:33:00 PM

I gotta dollah fo ya, hunny! Ha! Excellent win ya little vamp. xoxo

Lee Carter

Date: 7/15/2015 11:21:00 PM

Loved this! Congrats : )

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 11:07:00 PM

Hi Kim, I want to know what you were thinking when you wrote this haiku. Besides the obvious. I love the pressure center here. This is one of my fav movies... Enjoyed.. congrats on the win... LINDA

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/15/2015 10:52:00 PM

You probably can't see me because of the lights, but I'm at the front of your poem, wolf whistling and dribbling like a madman. WooHoo! Somebody call security! Great win, Kim, well done. Viv x