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Fearful Meeting

The lighting, it was over-bright. Without it, night was dark as sin. The big flash showed a scary sight. The lighting, it was over-bright. I thought my heart might stop from fright. The flash had shown a specter's grin. The lighting, it was over-bright. Without it, night was dark as sin. June 13, 2016

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Date: 7/10/2016 4:20:00 PM
love this scary write, my friend. hope you are well & having a great week xx
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Date: 6/30/2016 9:01:00 AM
Congrats Joyce, for your top placement with this beautiful piece!! ;-)
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Date: 6/29/2016 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win,Joyce!Loved the 'dark as sin'!
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Date: 6/29/2016 4:06:00 AM
Well expressed Joyce! Congrats.
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Date: 6/29/2016 2:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Joyce:) Really sinister:)
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Date: 6/28/2016 7:50:00 PM
great triolet, Joyce. I like that sixth line, you are right on sinister. Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 6/28/2016 4:51:00 PM
Great ink, Joyce!
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Date: 6/28/2016 1:44:00 PM
Great triolet, Joyce. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 6/28/2016 1:02:00 PM
Joyce, Congrats on your win and your specteral triolet.
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Date: 6/28/2016 12:00:00 PM
Joyce, congratulations on your podium win for your very eery poem! Well done! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/28/2016 11:53:00 AM
"A specter's grin" ensures it was scary for me, and you almost had your heart stopping from fright, I see. ;) Well done on your third place win on the very short winners' list, Joyce. Best wishes, Julia
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Date: 6/15/2016 3:51:00 PM
Wonderful Triolet, a form that I find hard to write in myself. A7
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Date: 6/14/2016 3:39:00 PM
That's a spooky write, Joyce! Great triolet!
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Date: 6/13/2016 8:26:00 PM
Lightning in the gems of my consciousness ... beautiful...
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