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Late in the day or afternoon From windows in our living room We watch deer begin to gather Leaping over fences in fields Searching eagerly for their meals To our front porch they meander Mothers protective of their fawn Will hide them in brush all day long Clear skies or inclement weather They watch us and nearer venture On alert for signs of danger Beginning March to September Late in the day or afternoon Unless noise scares them off soon Some two to twelve whitetailed deer Nibble tender sprouts of green grass Or fresh-cut hay and sassafrass It's common for them to appear In gardens or fields of soybeans Or frozen in our headlight beams Which can cause us panic and fear If it is in the dead of night Or maybe right before daylight Forcing vehicles to steer clear May 14, 2018 Favorite Animal in the Wild Contest by Line Gauthier Third Place

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Date: 8/15/2019 2:51:00 PM
Loved reading about the deer in your front yard Susan! I could picture the scenes you have described in the poem. -Smita
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Date: 5/15/2018 12:22:00 PM
Yours is beautiful imagery, Susan, and no wonder since this sounds like real life deer watching. I believe that the accompanying photo has also been taken by you. I've seen deer when travelling abroad, but here in Malta we don't have any:( Regards // paul
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/16/2018 6:36:00 AM
Thanks, Paul. Oh yes. Will change pic. Have better ones somewhere.
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/15/2018 12:23:00 PM
By the way...congratulations on your podium finish!!
Date: 5/14/2018 7:37:00 PM
Susan, a lovely poem in which I felt I was within your yard watching the peaceful deer nibbling away. Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs, Sonia
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/16/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/14/2018 3:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win Susan..
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/16/2018 6:38:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 5/14/2018 3:33:00 PM
my favorite wild animal too...thank you for expressing what I was completely unable to put into words. Kudos on your win! :) gw
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/16/2018 6:38:00 AM
Oh I doubt that. Thank you though.
Date: 5/14/2018 2:41:00 PM
Love this. Well done on your win, its such an absorbing read, with great focus on detail and imagery.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/16/2018 6:37:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 5/14/2018 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Susan!. This poem was a joy to read. Love deers! Nowhere to be found in my neck of the woods, though.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/14/2018 1:22:00 PM
Thank you, Edward! Appreciate your comment.
Date: 5/14/2018 12:30:00 PM
How lucky you are to watch them from the living room Susan. Great verse and congratulations. Tom.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/14/2018 1:21:00 PM
It is amazing! Thanks, Tom.
Date: 5/14/2018 11:55:00 AM
Congrats on your podium finish with this charmer, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/14/2018 1:20:00 PM
Thank you, Line. Am honored to be on your list of winners. Thanks for doing the contest and for all you do.
Date: 5/14/2018 10:58:00 AM
Wonderful penning Susan! Your love is in your ink. What a wonderful thing, a blessing you clearly count every day. My best to you in the contest! xomo :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/14/2018 1:19:00 PM
What a wonderful comment! Thank you. :)
Date: 5/14/2018 7:19:00 AM
Wow, you have many there! A lot of animals come through here, and sometimes deer, but not that many deer. Well written for the contest Line I enjoyed it:)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/14/2018 1:18:00 PM
Aww Heidi, thank you!
Date: 5/14/2018 7:18:00 AM
Well captured imagery of deer roaming among us...many can relate to their movements as you have depicted. Best for a win, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/14/2018 1:17:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay!

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