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'faucet of Broken Pieces'

They tore it apart Left it in pieces Like it was never intact Then they turned around and trampled on it You couldn’t recognize the love It once held The visions of your dreams scattered But I still see the glimmer of perseverance It is not completely gone Your voice is a little faint And yet you can still articulate what you feel Your determination might be curtailed But it is not lost It is still there I see it in the way you pretend that you are all right While you smile with your lips; but your eyes Oh honey, your eyes They are a faucet of broken pieces Pieces I pray will one day be restored It might not be the way it once were I am hoping for more splendid then before My only plea for now is that you remember to breathe…
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Date: 7/24/2016 8:14:00 PM
A great choice for the winners list. Congrats.
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Date: 7/24/2016 7:50:00 AM
Hi Wilma, Congratulations on your win in the contest with this emotionaly charged, excellent write. Tears weep from emotions thread. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 7/23/2016 11:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Great words. :)
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Date: 7/23/2016 11:02:00 PM
Wilam, congratulations on your win, hope to see you stop by my latest blog. Hugs. SKAT
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Date: 7/23/2016 5:51:00 PM
Wilma, congrats on your placement in the contest lady :)-luloo
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Date: 5/16/2016 10:24:00 AM
Salute to your pen and a well done to the mind out of which this sea of wisdom emanated. A definite 7
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Date: 4/22/2016 11:20:00 AM
Noted, Missy. I will try to remember to breathe. Breathe in...breathe out. I can relate to this on a certain level--3rd stanza struck me the most... (yet again, how come that always happens??)and "faucet of broken pieces" <--- can I kidnap that line?? How are you Missy busy? So nice to see your straight-to-the-emotions poem here... how are you? I hope you're doing good...
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Date: 4/20/2016 2:22:00 PM
- A moving and beautiful poem,Wilma - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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