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Fate

She wandered the moonlight caressed gardens of midnight barefoot on the stone paths, floral scents filling her deeply. Had she not planted the roses, would they not have grown? She must believe in her choices, herself, but fate was always the master. Yes, everything had bloomed accordingly to her thoughtful plan. Seasonal blooms in perfect rooms, rows and rows perfectly groomed. But the one thing she had never expected to raise alone was the marbled grey, cool to the touch, lovers headstone. For contest: eight lines of fate date: 7-2

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Date: 7/21/2018 11:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your writing is always magnificent. Well done! Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/21/2018 10:48:00 PM
Wow poignant twist, Casarah. Well done. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 7/21/2018 12:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Great poem about fate. A story of fate well told. :)
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Date: 7/19/2018 7:41:00 AM
- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful win, Casarah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/19/2018 7:34:00 AM
Great analogy and use of metaphor Casarah.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 7/9/2018 8:20:00 AM
You brought us there. Well done Casarah.
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Date: 7/3/2018 12:12:00 AM
Cas, you are so creative! I think this will play very well for the contest!
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Date: 7/2/2018 2:13:00 PM
Excellent verse Cas...I've got many of them where love has gone to die...lol
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