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Farewell Friend

Sweet friendship comes in many forms you worked for years at the local meat store your presence, the sparkle that lit up the room with a cheerful smile, and bright eyes, blue. You greeted all with warmth and care made colorful signage with great flair delightful pictures on all the walls cows, fences, green fields, and blue waterfalls. We connected, had a bond, you and I always exchanged highlights of our lives you welcomed me with a big, sisterly hug and never forgot to ask me how I was. Yesterday, I walked into that little store as I had done so many times before there, at the entrance, right before my eyes was a picture of you, and a note that you’d died. The shock of your death, a sudden fall jolted me…this could not be, no, not at all! For I had just spoken to you, not long ago you were full of life, so happy and whole. The sting of death, that final farewell I never got to say goodbye, I could not tell how much your sweet life meant to me goodbye, dear Paula, as you go to God eternally. Written on 7/11/2022

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Date: 8/8/2022 5:50:00 PM
Your poem is so full of love for a friend ~ it must resonate with everyone. Death seems always a shock, even when expected ~ an adjustment to our life. Your poem is lovely.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/8/2022 9:07:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Ann. It was a shock, and I’ll always remember her…
Date: 7/20/2022 5:15:00 AM
so beautiful... God bless you sweet soul, Love and prayers, Gina
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/31/2022 4:40:00 PM
Thank you, Gina! :)
Date: 7/17/2022 6:45:00 AM
Hi Laura, Your poem brings back a memory from such a short time ago, When souper, Carolyn Devonshire, died, after 10 years of many comments her death, very much as your poetry, was such a shock. Harry
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/17/2022 8:38:00 AM
Yes, it does happen so unexpectedly, doesn’t it? I know Carolyn was a much loved poet to you and many other Soupers. I appreciate your stopping by to comment, Harry.
Date: 7/15/2022 2:21:00 PM
Dear Laura, this poem came on a timely mention , my neighbor of 40 years suddenly had a heart attack and died , overnight, it only happened a few days ago, it is such a shock, to lose someone and not get a chance to say goodbye. I told her husband, every day was a hello and a goodbye, he will miss her I'm sure, thank you for the poem, God bless !
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/15/2022 2:28:00 PM
I understand and am sorry for the loss of your neighbor, Vie. Only God really knows our days on this earth…every day is precious! Thanks for commenting.
Date: 7/14/2022 1:04:00 PM
Such a lovely touching piece Laura, your friend truly had a great effect upon you and so difficult when people go from this life in a moment. This is superbly penned with lovely rhyme and flows throughout. Blessings and peace, Gordon
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/14/2022 1:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful comments, Gordon. I am so saddened by her loss. One is never prepared for it…
Date: 7/13/2022 12:42:00 PM
So sorry ... those exquisite, yet seemingly simple relationships are much more appreciated when they are stolen from our grasp!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/13/2022 12:50:00 PM
Thank you, Craig, for your kind comments. I am still upset over the sudden loss.
Date: 7/11/2022 3:27:00 PM
the same thing happened to my wife last week, a 22-year-old young man she worked with every day died in a car accident, it hit her pretty hard
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/11/2022 5:19:00 PM
I’m sorry for her, as well. This literally happened yesterday, 7/10. I’m still in shock. Thanks for commenting, Frederic.

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