Far Sighted

It takes more sight than you would see To love the soul that belongs to me. 9/24/21

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Date: 10/3/2021 12:52:00 PM

Hi Michelle, an ingenious write my friend, indeed clever. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Date: 9/26/2021 10:02:00 AM

Ah, this one is brilliant, so many forget to adore their own souls, I must remember this line, can I borrow it sometime ?

Date: 9/25/2021 8:01:00 PM

'Cheeky,' as Julie Andrews/Mary Poppins once said! Cheers, Gershon

Date: 9/25/2021 11:22:00 AM

What? Pheromones are not soul-worthy?

Date: 9/25/2021 9:25:00 AM

WoW! Michelle, This is so well they well written and deep. Is it for the contest? Have a wonderful weekend:-)Alexis

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/25/2021 9:38:00 AM

Well at first I put it in, then changed my mind and put in my other couplet 'cloudy skies' - thanks for your comment~

Date: 9/25/2021 7:12:00 AM

Your couplets run deep Michelle. Great read. Good luck in the contest. Cheers - Gary

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/25/2021 8:17:00 AM

Thank you, Gary, it is appreciated~

Date: 9/24/2021 10:57:00 PM

Michelle, Very nice sight and soul in your 'Far Sighted'. Next time I'll remember to bring spectacles. Have a nice week-end. -Richard

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/25/2021 8:17:00 AM

Ironically, I'm quite near - sighted! Thanks for your comment~