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Fantasy Thinks

I think I dream far more often than I think. I prefer not logic, but creative ink. Rational thoughts go until they hit stop while fantasies omit a bottom and top. I think birds fly south ahead of winter’s cold to continue playing where sun turns fun gold and all bored Salmon fight their way upstream because a vigorous swim ignites fertile dreams. I think no living creature lives life nocturnal due to daytime fact writing in their journal but because they much prefer an active night where heaven’s bright stars bolster dreams to ignite. Seas dislike their still facts being all man knows, so, clearly, I think I know why the ocean flows. April 25, 2020 Silent One - Poetic Lines From A Poetry Soup Poet Vijay Pandit is credited with the italicized words in the last line of this poem as taken from his poem, “I Think I Know Why the Ocean Flows”

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Date: 5/17/2020 8:27:00 PM
congrats my friend. Also go see POTD by Michael Tori(?) He says what I KNOW is so true in the world now.
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Date: 5/17/2020 8:27:00 PM
Michael tor
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Date: 5/17/2020 8:26:00 PM
wow this is one of the very best I saw for that contest. I see you got second. For me it's a topper!
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Date: 5/3/2020 9:56:00 PM
You did wonderful with this beautiful entry CayCay. Congratulations on your second placement! xxoo
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/17/2020 8:28:00 PM
check out POTD by Micharel Tor. I know you feel this way as I do too.
Date: 5/3/2020 6:38:00 AM
Interesting last few lines... nice take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 4/30/2020 3:32:00 AM
Fantastic imagination, CayCay, nice little poem you got here:)
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Date: 4/25/2020 12:57:00 PM
Fantasy thoughts completely changed the life of Rowling when she added ink, so go for it! Aloha! Rico
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