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Boundless, the possibilities for dreamers; Interval visions for believers freeing time of structured sand, sifting through clock’s hands, allowing fanned imaging’s unfettering strands to now literally expand sieving pictures through dreamtime’s siever. Boundless, the possibilities for dreamers. © All Rights Reserved by Author 2/15/15 I’d name this form: Etheree Hourglass

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Date: 2/27/2015 10:59:00 PM
Debra, nice win. SKAT
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Date: 2/24/2015 12:39:00 AM
Superb write Debra! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 2/23/2015 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/23/2015 7:39:00 AM
Well done. Grats on your win!
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Date: 2/23/2015 2:01:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Debra:-) Hugs jan xx So glad you got it centered in the end:-) xx
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Date: 2/23/2015 12:25:00 AM
This is a very classy write, Debra! it only got put a bit lower on my list for wrong syllable count with the line using the word 'literally." Very creative vision of time! Congrats on your win.
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Debra Squyres
Date: 2/23/2015 2:18:00 PM
I must have missed that line in the syllable counter you suggested.
Date: 2/23/2015 12:25:00 AM
I liked your name for my form too, dearie!!
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Date: 2/16/2015 10:40:00 AM
Like the sands through the hour glass. So are the days of our lives. :):):):)
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Date: 2/16/2015 5:06:00 AM
Very nice pen, Debra ! I really enjoyed your piece, dear friend! Enjoyed it! A 7 from me!I wish you a very nice day! In his light! God bless you! :) xxx D"
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Date: 2/15/2015 4:40:00 PM
soup mail :-) xx
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Date: 2/15/2015 4:09:00 PM
Beautifully penned good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 2/15/2015 4:10:00 PM
Thank you... I can't get it to center on the page !!! Don't have a clue what I'm doing wrong... ughhh !!
Date: 2/15/2015 4:00:00 PM
I couldn't get it to center... ughhh... It does look like an hourglass when centered.
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