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Falling Star

A moment at night Something fall outside the door Sparkling gem so bright Pick up a shovel Whilst getting to melt soil Held it on my hand Can't utter a word Vibrant hue and glow persists Turns to diamond. As its warmth persists It suddenly fall while glows Keep shinning afar Old woman get it Handed down on my palms then Become one with me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/26/2016 7:47:00 AM
Greetings Marvin. Congrats for having your enchanting piece featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 2/26/2016 8:07:00 AM
Thank you Teddy!
Date: 1/9/2015 4:18:00 AM
Very nice pen Marvin! I enjoyed your poetic piece dear friend! A 7 from me! I wish you the best in 2015! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D."
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Date: 11/3/2014 9:29:00 PM
the mystery of night and the diamond. very clever.
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 11/3/2014 10:54:00 PM
Thanks David!