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Fallen Angel

She gently holds her remaining bliss in her soul, like a rose hidden away from the wilting of fall. The world he promised her turned to barren, damned, desert, when she saw him kissing Karen. Every hope she had for a future with him turned into ashes right before her eyes, which then burned. She can't stop the tears from falling on her cheeks; her heart has to take a very long time to get a fix. Darkness is the only thing she sees in love; a curse she believes she will never forgive. All she wants to do is travel far away to hide, from love that might follow her from behind. Date of Entry: 07/08/2017

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Date: 9/1/2017 7:30:00 AM
Lovely write, Teddy - tinged with sadness, but elegantly portrayed. Especially like the "rose hidden away from the wilting of fall" line. Well done!! Regards, John.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/7/2017 12:30:00 PM
Hi John. I really appreciate your time to read and applaud my work!! So kind!! ;-)
Date: 8/29/2017 5:35:00 AM
Congrats Teddy, a lovely poem :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/7/2017 12:29:00 PM
Thank you so much for your applause, Gary!! ;-)
Date: 8/25/2017 4:07:00 PM
Wonderful metaphor and story, Teddy - I enjoyed this very much! Congrats on your win!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/27/2017 6:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Greg! I really appreciate your time to read and enjoy my work! ;-)
Date: 8/25/2017 6:50:00 AM
my sister's name is Karen, this kind of reminded me of her, great poem, thank you :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/27/2017 6:53:00 AM
Omg! What a coincidence! You're welcome, Laura! ;-) Thank you too, for taking time to read and enjoy my work! *^_^*
Date: 8/21/2017 1:16:00 PM
Beautiful Teddy.... beautuful
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/22/2017 9:07:00 AM
Thank you so much for enjoying my piece, Pashang! *^_^*
Date: 8/7/2017 7:17:00 AM
This is a great rhyming poem for the contest Teddy :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/7/2017 8:43:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my work, Heidi!! *^_^*
Date: 8/7/2017 4:44:00 AM
A great write Teddy, i like how this piece rolls of the tongue.. lyrical :-)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/7/2017 8:42:00 AM
Asante sana, Lewis! Nashukuru sana!! :-)

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