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Fall Season

Long nights upon us tree rodents gather nuts shed. Swollen limbs naked, the hungry ground has it all laid out on a soiled platter. Copyright © 2012 By Caryl S. Muzzey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/25/2012 11:27:00 AM
I knew this one was a winner..Enjoyed reading again..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/24/2012 3:29:00 PM
I really loved the imagery of this one and the cute idea at the end. Big congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/24/2012 3:24:00 PM
Contest results .... you won, congratulations. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/24/2012 11:03:00 AM
Wow!...very descriptive tanka, Caryl...last 2 lines especially...congratulations! - Tim
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Date: 10/24/2012 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2012 3:12:00 AM
CONGRATS CARYL ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS LOVELY WRITE LUV ..
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Date: 10/23/2012 6:51:00 PM
CARLY, CONGRATULATIONS !!! :-) enjoyed your wonderful poem in Nathan's "Tanka (Season)" contest... take care~xox~PD
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Date: 10/22/2012 3:13:00 PM
very descriptive one, CAryl. I really like this!
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Date: 10/21/2012 12:35:00 PM
Carly, love the image, good luck in Nathan's contest....pd
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Date: 10/15/2012 1:47:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. Just lovely. :-)
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Date: 10/15/2012 6:08:00 AM
Much luck in the contest... it could be a winner! Big huggeroonies, Jack
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Date: 10/14/2012 1:19:00 PM
Interesting work that you have penned for the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 10/7/2012 10:36:00 AM
Lovely Tanka!! Such talent pours down the page!! Hugs Michael
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