Fall-TB

Soft, gentle breeze upon trees gold leaves, seize the sun.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/20/2023 10:48:00 PM

Wow I love this.

Terry Miller
Date: 11/22/2023 2:58:00 AM

Thank you Andrea

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/17/2023 8:27:00 PM

Nice flow! Congratulations!

Terry Miller
Date: 11/20/2023 8:09:00 AM

Thank you

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/17/2023 12:25:00 PM

Terry, congratulations on your win! Charlie is right, your images are so vibrant. I love the word "seize." Masterful movement! Cheers and blessings!

Terry Miller
Date: 11/20/2023 8:10:00 AM

Thank you Sam

Charles Messina

Date: 11/17/2023 4:47:00 AM

I just love the imagery here, Terry. A fine write, my friend. Congratulations on your win!

Terry Miller
Date: 11/20/2023 8:10:00 AM

Thank you so much and thank you for the competition it was an interesting challenge