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Fade Away

This tear stained soul called out in pain The day our pleasures fell like rain Your softest touch my skin knew well Now scars my heart with pangs from hell Fade away Nirvana, fade away Fade away Nirvana, fade away Mournful thoughts cut like Blue North Winds As I strain to hear your voice again I've tried new words and sang our song But a change of lyrics just seemed wrong Fade away Nirvana, fade away Fade away Nirvana, fade away I miss the quiet spent at your side With love, no one could make us hide But now the noise of less things said Drowns out the hope that's left for dead Fade away Nirvana, fade away Fade away Nirvana, fade away 8/25/2020

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Date: 12/1/2020 4:52:00 PM
:( Charlie I'm sorry ...you seem so positive. It's uplifting to me :)
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Date: 12/1/2020 2:25:00 PM
Oh man Charlie sorry to hear about the surgeries :( Had one to the neck then two to the back last year. I feel your pain! Follow Dr's orders Charlie!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 12/1/2020 2:32:00 PM
It’s my forth and last. This one has put me in a wheelchair forever. But it least it’s motorized. 61/2 mph, watch out, here comes Charlie
Date: 12/1/2020 1:36:00 PM
Oh wow Charlie... just wow. How have you been? :)
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Charlie Smith
Date: 12/1/2020 2:11:00 PM
Thanks FJ, doing much better now that I’m back home. I’ve had my fill of spine surgeries. Thanks so much for asking...
Date: 9/20/2020 5:24:00 AM
Fantastic lyric Pangie xx
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/20/2020 6:16:00 AM
Thanks Panagiota...
Date: 9/2/2020 6:19:00 AM
A love like this may fade from sight, but it will never fade from the heart's memory. Beautiful lines, Charlie.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/2/2020 7:43:00 PM
Thank you Jenna...
Date: 8/31/2020 3:32:00 PM
Exceptionally crafted poetry my great friend. Sad and sweetly deep. Love the fade away refrain.. A jewel, and a great fav too.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/1/2020 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Robert...
Date: 8/30/2020 3:58:00 PM
I miss the quiet spent at your side There is nothing I love more then a beautiful silence spent in the right company. Thank you for sharing Charlie, be well,
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Charlie Smith
Date: 9/1/2020 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Pixie...
Date: 8/26/2020 9:04:00 AM
oh this is sad, and you can feel it through your words and how you formatted it... deeply emotive... great poetry.. Hope you are well my friend. If it is personal, then please accept my condolences for your loss..
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/28/2020 7:50:00 AM
Not personal SO, thanks...
Date: 8/26/2020 8:44:00 AM
Very touching Charlie, hope it is not personal, if it is my condolences, too many people dying lately.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/28/2020 7:49:00 AM
Not personal John, thanks...
Date: 8/26/2020 6:37:00 AM
- A heartbreaking poem ... I feel deep longing :) - Nice to see you ... hope everything is well :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/28/2020 7:48:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, everything is wonderful...
Date: 8/25/2020 6:18:00 PM
Very nice Charlie, I like the beat of your Lyric poem.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/25/2020 7:52:00 PM
Thank you Beldon...
Date: 8/25/2020 3:48:00 PM
wow, one of the better ones posted today. This is very poignant. I think I am giving my third FAVE today here.
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Date: 8/25/2020 7:51:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 8/25/2020 1:33:00 PM
This is quite touching Charlie--the scene flashes in front of the reader (listener) in elegant rhythm of hearts. Lovely lyrics!
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Charlie Smith
Date: 8/25/2020 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Vijay...

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