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Eyes

Eyes Smiling Touching me In those places Deep within my heart Bringing serenity While I sleep in peaceful dreams Being held in your loving arms Feeling your warm touch against my skin Wanting this moment to last forever Listening to your heart’s gentle beating Heaven in the comfort of your love A life renewed by your sweet smile Touching the depths of my soul Taking away my breath Fulfilling my dreams Seeing the flames Within your Loving Eyes

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E.J. Smith

Date: 9/18/2011 6:50:00 PM

Subtly sexy...love the surprise in the ending lines. Beautifully done. E.J.

Judy Ball

Date: 7/28/2011 12:59:00 AM

A really good love poem here. The eyes will tell you what the lips won't say. They are the windows of the soul. Great job here. God Bless, JB

Mary Blevins

Date: 6/21/2011 12:18:00 PM

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Mary Blevins

Date: 6/21/2011 11:48:00 AM

Beautiful, just beautiful, Vince! Thank You, for your comment about, "Women Of Extinction".

Margaret Okubo

Date: 6/15/2011 4:06:00 PM

A very warm and love filed poem Vince. I am actually working on my third book. I asm in the editing stage. Will keep you updated. Blessings.

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 5/30/2011 1:27:00 PM

What a remarkably beautiful love poem, aesthetically worded and enchanting. It gives glow to the eyes. Thanks for your kind words on my poem My Departed Friends. -Mohammad

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/17/2011 6:47:00 AM

A nicely constructed and poetic piece.

Lisa Cooper

Date: 5/11/2011 6:44:00 PM

so lovely. the eyes truly are the window to your soul

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/27/2011 7:55:00 AM

This is a heartwarmer.....the eyes can hold a world of emotions behind them! Nice one!!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/27/2011 6:58:00 AM

Wow this is an excellent poem so full of passion and love. love phyl

James Foulk

Date: 4/22/2011 12:57:00 PM

a very nice write, enjoyed reading it.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/20/2011 4:50:00 AM

hi there, vince... souo mail! :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/19/2011 6:28:00 AM

Very cool! were we supposed to put them under free verse? [when your attacked hold up a mirror and let them scare themselves to death!] even this is naughty LOL, Light & Love