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Existence

awkwardly I dance because I have two left feet hard to find partner I watch you dancing it seems you have two right feet let us share some shoes will you follow me for if we move together dance will have purpose you move fluidly my feet provide the structure made for each other no limitations with artistry and purpose we dance with the stars life is not boring we live within the rhythm music from heaven God is our maestro leading us to forever in death we won't part

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Bawa Talwar

Date: 9/11/2018 7:31:00 PM

Great job done !

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/12/2018 12:30:00 AM

Thanks.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/8/2015 4:07:00 PM

a deep writ Rick so much between your lines hugs 7

Md Johnson

Date: 7/25/2015 10:15:00 PM

I have always to told my wife that my ancestors came to America on the wallflower. Even so, I did enjoy this dancing synryu. Well done.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/26/2015 8:57:00 AM

Thanks Michael. Cute response!

Brenda Rose

Date: 7/23/2015 11:48:00 PM

I did not know this form of poetry genre. As the master of poetry you are you did a beautiful job. I was just wondering if there was a reason for no capitalization? As always a 7! You are a versatile poet talented with many types of poetry. Mine are all rhyme. Thank you once again.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/24/2015 12:12:00 AM

Mainly because it is an Asian form and like a haiku I have not used capital letters.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/22/2015 10:50:00 PM

Absolutely stunning set of senryus.. Really enjoyed reading:) Always Laura a fav for sure!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/23/2015 7:46:00 AM

Thanks Laura, you are sweet.

Jill Spagnola

Date: 7/7/2015 1:17:00 PM

This is just beautiful, jill

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/23/2015 7:46:00 AM

Thanks Jill.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/4/2015 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful esquisit verse. Hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 1:17:00 PM

Thanks Eve! enjoy your weekend.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/4/2015 11:39:00 AM

I love what you did here,Exquisite !

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 12:04:00 PM

Thanks Charmaine. Hugs Rick.

Aiyah Torres

Date: 7/4/2015 10:56:00 AM

awesome! This is my fave one. Congrats ,Rick!! :O))

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 12:05:00 PM

You are sweet, thanks.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/4/2015 8:28:00 AM

Can't help but smile after reading your poems..congrats to you! BG

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 9:16:00 AM

Thank Barb.

Edward Ebbs

Date: 7/4/2015 1:24:00 AM

Great witness and congrats on your win!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:53:00 AM

Thanks Ed.

Constance La France

Date: 7/3/2015 10:57:00 PM

Richard congratulations on your wonderful win

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:54:00 AM

Thanks Constance.:0)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/3/2015 10:12:00 PM

Superb passionate senryu Richard!Congrats on ur win!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:54:00 AM

Thanks Upma.

Skat A

Date: 7/3/2015 6:46:00 PM

Richard, Congratulations on the win. SKAT

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:55:00 AM

Much appreciated SKAT.

Lycia Harding

Date: 7/3/2015 6:32:00 PM

Great romantic write. Congratulations, Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:55:00 AM

Thanks Lycia.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 6:23:00 PM

Richard,, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:56:00 AM

Thanks Linda.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2015 4:45:00 PM

I see the judge is a romantic. Sure wish I had known that when I did this challenge. haha. BIG congrats on a well deserved win.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:56:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, much appreciated.

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/3/2015 4:27:00 PM

A beautiful story told in this string of senryu, Richard! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:58:00 AM

Thanks Kim, I am not that familiar with the form so I am pleased to be chosen.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/3/2015 12:13:00 PM

Brilliant string of Senryu with profound message! Congratulations, Rick, on a wonderful win! Pandita

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:58:00 AM

Thanks Pandita, so pleased you enjoyed them.

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 7/3/2015 4:44:00 AM

Congratz Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 7:59:00 AM

Thanks Marvin.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/1/2015 2:24:00 PM

Bravo Richard! An impressive and creative string of senryu, with a smart introduction and then you dance on to the perfect ending. #7 // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 8:00:00 AM

You are kind Paul.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/1/2015 9:20:00 AM

Richard, lovely strings that individually they can stand too.. =)~Olive ELoisa

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 8:02:00 AM

I'm glad, that was my goal.

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/1/2015 8:28:00 AM

Loved the title wordplay, Rick. More, the content in this string. Should do well in the contest. You have a lifetime to continue the dance.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/4/2015 8:03:00 AM

That is my hope. Thanks Kim.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/1/2015 1:37:00 AM

Richard, this is a wonderful write. Death never seemed so tranquil until I found myself loving the last 3 lines... Love Linda

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2015 7:50:00 AM

Thanks Linda.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 7/1/2015 1:03:00 AM

Well done Richard. Verlena

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/1/2015 7:50:00 AM

Hi again Verlena.