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The maid busy cleaning the library by any means necessary. Jerry and Berry, the Macaw parrots sitting on their tree perch waiting for their tidbits of carrots; When the maid got closer to the dictionary with her wooden handle feather duster They got excited, with high-pitch squawks, heads switching side to side, start fluttering their wings with the warm sun around her red hair, and they howler, " Where are our carrots?" 4/30/2023 'Writing Challenge - Words with 'X' -' Poetry Contest 7. excited Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 5/10/2023 6:45:00 PM
So vivid, Eve! Love it! A fave!
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Date: 5/10/2023 8:08:00 PM
thank you, Kim... very pleased with the fave
Date: 5/5/2023 8:55:00 PM
Fun poem with lots of action and imagery. Congrats on your win ... it deserved it. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 5/5/2023 1:20:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Eve - hugs
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Date: 5/4/2023 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative/fun write.  I love it. Have a great/blessed day...............
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Date: 5/4/2023 6:49:00 AM
Eve, thank you for sharing your fun poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 5/2/2023 5:30:00 PM
Eve,,,very creative,I enjoyed it trough and through, Pangie
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Date: 5/1/2023 3:00:00 PM
what a fun poem and picture Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/1/2023 6:52:00 AM
- An enjoyable poem, dear Eve :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 5/1/2023 12:07:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Date: 4/30/2023 10:44:00 PM
Lovely picture and poem. Best for a win.
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