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Eternal Spring Collaboration

The longest shadows start and end the day like thoughts that creep from embryo to grave so here within the midday sun we pray to not be where the shadows misbehave. But even in the bliss of summer highs, bold thunder clouds roll in to snap and sneer. When daunting lightning fractures purple skies, its striking beauty slays instinctive fear. A child has dreams of what life may become, as elders wish they'd captured all those dreams, but in the midst of life we all succumb to fate and its bizarre unwritten schemes. Yet in the face of unexpected pain, we have the strength to confiscate the quill, to change the tune of fate's unsung refrain. Then, from our daring hearts, the ink will spill. It drips on clefs that show us what to sing: a world of notes that paint eternal spring. This is a heroic sonnet that I wrote with Craig Cornish, one of my favourite gents here on PS! I wrote verses 2&4 and line 2 of the couplet Craig wrote verses 1&3 and the first line of the couplet

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Date: 11/5/2015 3:33:00 PM
Hey, Heather, let me know if there is a poem of yours somewhere i have not seen. I keep clicking on great ones like this that I have already commented to. Thanks for seeing my poem!
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Date: 11/3/2015 12:50:00 PM
Oh...how did I miss this? This is so sweet...Oh dear...I'm so enamored by this write. A fav...of course. Two of my fav people here. Hugs, sweetie. :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/3/2015 1:05:00 PM
I'd be honored...
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Heather Ober
Date: 11/3/2015 12:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eileen! Craig and I wrote this in the span of a few hours - We were both surprised by that! You and I should try a collab sometime :)
Date: 9/27/2015 12:13:00 PM
Read this beautiful collaboration you two made, and I am so mesmerized by the words! Excellent job in merging with Craig's poetic mind, Heather! This turned out to be a gorgeous and interesting poem! Always, Laura
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Date: 9/16/2015 1:18:00 AM
wow, you guys did an amazing job with this. You are LYRICAL geniuses with this sonnet!! Fantastic.
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Date: 9/15/2015 7:50:00 AM
Two of my favorites blended to perfection.
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Date: 9/14/2015 11:57:00 AM
Elegance and beauty in these lines. I enjoyed reading the product of your collaboration with Craig, Heather. This is a lovely way to be acquainted with your work. It will be a pleasure to read more of yours in the coming days. Congratulations on your successful collab. Kim
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