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Eternal Breeze

Whispering wind , Sweet whispering wind please carry my love on your breeze We've been parted so long In my arms she belongs Carry her home to me please . Whispering wind , Sweet whispering wind I place my faith in your gentle breeze I said things unkind , Put doubt in her mind Please carry my sincere apologies . Please carry my kisses and my hearts only key Gentle breeze. Eternal breeze , Truth in all you touch Bring her safely home to me I am missing her so much.

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Tim Smith

Date: 2/10/2014 7:20:00 PM

Very beautiful my friend

Darren Watson
Date: 2/10/2014 7:36:00 PM

Thank you Tim delighted you enjoyed it buddy.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/10/2014 5:53:00 PM

This poem is quite beautiful, Darren. I really loved it! These sad, yet heartfelt words seemed to flow effortlessly from your pen. Wonderful work!

Darren Watson
Date: 2/10/2014 6:06:00 PM

Thank you Kelly but the pen you speak of was partially loaded with invisible ink and the words I wanted to write are missing . I will do better. Daz

Skat A

Date: 2/10/2014 4:38:00 PM

Hi Darren, heartfelt, and moving. I feel the sadness in the whispering wind, and the longing you need her safely in your arms... Thank you. SKAT

Darren Watson
Date: 2/10/2014 5:45:00 PM

Thank you Gail . I did reply earlier but my replies keep jumping . Must have a ghost in this machine.

Darren Watson
Date: 2/10/2014 5:14:00 PM

Thank you Gail for both the comments and the affection . Love and cuddles , Daz

Darren Watson
Date: 2/10/2014 5:11:00 PM

Have a feeling of melancholy tonight and I'm determined to shake it off . A glass has never been half empty for me and its never going to be . Thank you SKAT .