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Eternal Breath

the body deteriorates every muscle and organ failing a catastrophic climb to maintain the bodies' duties but it slips, takes a plunge and now your heart flutters the beats become your final bass notes as the head adapts to the helplessness it's a pain like no other a terror of the unknown- then gone. As if a gust of wind swooped in to grab the soul all light lost The corpse lay in a captured moment listening and hearing the final words It lay there listening to your eternally warming breath Sarah Casey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/7/2014 11:34:00 PM
the marvelous poem about the most solemn event in our life. How pity that I could not granted such eternal warming breath for my mom, in "her captured moment" in summer, 2010. I was just stay near her bed with other relates and wiped.
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