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Estimate the Cost

You look back and dream of days long gone You can feel the tears as they're coming on Just realizing how much you lost It's no way to estimate the cost Once you walked with purpose and your will was strong Wouldn't back down now somehow it all seems wrong Never found out how the dice were tossed Just count the chips and estimate the cost Oh the price was more than you thought it would be You just turned your back so you wouldn't see There were limits set but those lines you crossed Never took the time to estimate the cost Now time is closing down that open road Memories become such a heavy load Autumn years will bring an early frost Too late to sit and estimate the cost Now you're just a few steps ahead of the hell you made It wasn't supposed to be how the game was played Total disregard, oh how the rules were tossed Now the time has come to estimate the cost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/30/2014 11:40:00 AM
A lovely poem reflecting on decisions made and the price we all pay. I like the repetition Well written. Best wishes Linda
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Date: 3/28/2012 11:55:00 PM
A well put and reflective write here Vince,, the truth and dissasociation in life we all "take part in"by default; is explored honestly it gives out the sense,, that we must be careful with oppertunitys in our journey on earth..)
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Date: 3/21/2012 6:59:00 AM
Very well crafted... the flow and couplet rhyming are superb. There is a definite beginning, middle and end... the mark of a storyteller. Well done, Vince. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 3/13/2012 8:30:00 PM
I love THIS poem. Oh,how I can relate to this! They say anything in the retirement age is The Golden Years, but I have yet to see anything Golden. It's down hill all the way! Good write. GB, Avis
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Date: 3/6/2012 10:28:00 AM
You captured it all in this one Vince a definite favorite for me. Thank you for checking on my featured write this week.. Hope your week is a great one :) love Wilma
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Date: 3/5/2012 7:19:00 PM
I really like this one Vince ....a reality write from one who's been there it's obvious and I enjoyed the style of your poem also. Way to go.
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Date: 2/22/2012 4:12:00 PM
They say hind-sight is 20/20 but I say fore-sight is 1/1,000,000. look to the future and learn from the past, the sand through the hourglass is out of your grasp. thank you for all your lovely comments on my work.
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Date: 2/16/2012 1:30:00 PM
It is not good to come to the end of life and look back and see many regrets..This could be a lesson in making wise choices to the youth of the world..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Date: 2/16/2012 7:10:00 AM
Bravo....very good poem,thank you for the trip. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/15/2012 11:22:00 AM
Hi, Vince. The cost is too damn high. Education would seem to be a way back to sanity, but who can afford it? Had to see what you were doing these days. Nothing has changed with Vince, and that be good. Love, daver
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