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Ere I Freeze

Alone I walked and unspoken I tried, Unseen I searched and unknown was I hoped. O Lord! My Lord! Something's there in this road. Will not you answer what is this deep doubt? The road's windy and rainy, do tell me, Lest my dim heart would ever be gloomy. Please O please, send me "A breeze" so to soothe. If you have some flowers, I won't mind it, Or for some songs, I believe a small bird. No more rain but Stars to look at - instead. Water's soft yet sometimes it wears a Stone. The beauty's simple, simple makes me mourn. I dare not look at the so breezy breeze. Lord it's never late : help me out ere I freeze.

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Date: 11/18/2017 8:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Isor.
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Isor Chand
Date: 11/19/2017 4:43:00 AM
Thanks and much appreciated for your visit
Date: 10/30/2017 8:04:00 AM
A lovely write Isor.
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Isor Chand
Date: 10/30/2017 8:17:00 AM
Enormous thank you
Date: 10/29/2017 4:10:00 PM
Congrats Isor! Lovely theme!
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Isor Chand
Date: 10/30/2017 6:05:00 AM
Thank I never expected
Date: 10/29/2017 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in this contest!
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Date: 10/30/2017 6:05:00 AM
Oh really ! Never believed

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