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Equal Rights

Equal Rights are guaranteed by law Quality of life has a major flaw Universal acceptance will start the thaw American laws are still too raw Leadership lost the bigoted draw Rights are rights, they belong to all Idiots who fear to make the call Give equality or watch the nation fall Help the just tear down the wall Truth prevail while hate will stall See us from the dark ages crawl Discrimination is discrimination no matter how it is disguised.

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/4/2015 9:55:00 AM

What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

Linda Jackson

Date: 3/8/2014 2:21:00 PM

Well written acrostic. I like the rhyming at the end of the sentence. Equal rights are a must in a civilised society. Best wishes Linda

Daver Austin

Date: 2/16/2014 11:12:00 AM

I like to tell everyone this - in my grade school class (1930s) the two smartest kids in the class were black. Good stuff, Vince. Love, daver

Funom Makama

Date: 2/14/2014 12:25:00 PM

This is unbelievable and beyond words... Good job Vince! A quality right with a soul- piercing message

Daver Austin

Date: 1/15/2014 12:49:00 PM

Dream on, Vince and I'll dream along with you. Congrats. daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/17/2013 12:08:00 AM

once again, you covered a subject most will not agree on... it is what it is no matter how one will see it... Good night...LINDA

Linda Jackson

Date: 11/12/2013 4:20:00 AM

Words of wisdom shine out of this poem. Wonderful. Best wishes Linda x

Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/5/2013 8:03:00 AM

Excellent write, yes your comment is so true as is the message within your poem, great read, blessings sueellen

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/28/2013 10:05:00 PM

So true Vince awesome write I loved each line great flowing piece! Laura :)

Christine Phillips

Date: 7/21/2013 4:32:00 AM

Very nice commentary on the social injustice today. You have deep insight.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2013 7:11:00 AM

It would be very hard to write a law that could not be manipulated to read the way someone wanted it to read..I believe that really deep down inside each person knows what is right but we tend to ignore it..Interesting topic chosen about which to write and one to open up much conversation..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/19/2013 2:52:00 PM

Hello Vince, you are right... a no way out situation.. wish the law was a bit tougher... enjoyed... happy late birthday.. luv~ LINDA