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Epiphany of Depth

my poor desultory heart depleting- the hiding and seeking can never find an epiphany of depth, repeating all that life has given is defeating, for the soft silent stars never aligned- my poor desultory heart depleting a bright myriad of moments fleeting, grains of an unkind life have been designed; an epiphany of depth, repeating tempting hunger can’t keep me from eating, for I am longing and wanting combined- my poor desultory heart depleting no winning or losing in competing, this gamble in life has made my heart blind; an epiphany of depth, repeating craving remedies when there’s no treating, o, if only I was not so confined- my poor desultory heart depleting; an epiphany of depth, repeating Date - 1.26.20 Your Best 2019-2020 Villanelle Poetry Contest Sponsor - William Kekaula

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Date: 1/31/2020 12:00:00 PM
Love the impact of the repeated refrain luloo, you write deep poems so well, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2020 11:14:00 PM
Such a sad deep verse, Laura, congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/29/2020 8:16:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... revealing your heart through your enthralling poetic style. God bless you. (While writing this, inspired by your gift with your workmanship, I behold you smiling).
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Date: 1/29/2020 2:59:00 PM
Lu Loo, Your poetic style is always so winsome and evocative. You handled this deep subject and challenging form so poetically. I like the line, "craving remedies when there’s no treating", though I love every line. Congrats on #2 placement, friend ~ John
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Date: 1/29/2020 4:09:00 PM
thank you dear John, you made me smile. x:-)
Date: 1/29/2020 2:29:00 PM
Deep and emotive rendering of your signature style LuLoo, my compliments on 2nd place and thanks for your participation.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/29/2020 4:09:00 PM
thank you so much! I am honored you enjoyed it. HUgs from Michigan x:-)
Date: 1/26/2020 4:31:00 PM
I like the chants in these types of poems...the haunt is in repeating...
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/27/2020 7:32:00 AM
thank you dear Arturo x:-)

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