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I am you the splitting of two we shall eat our rage in small doses now you are me in the mirror there’s three three caskets covered in roses

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Date: 11/11/2023 11:30:00 AM
Wow, I cartwheeled through this poem with wide eyes... Very powerful words that leave you mystified and full of questions
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/19/2023 5:51:00 PM
my gratitude
Date: 11/9/2023 3:04:00 PM
The Holy Trinity Power of 3 Good Me Evil Me Plain Me But in the end of the day All 3 make up 1 Me
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/19/2023 5:51:00 PM
;)
Date: 11/7/2023 12:35:00 AM
Excellent. Eon. Aeon. Sounds like a dysfunctional family to me. One of those longings for a crazy get together at Christmas with unplanned fireworks. And by the time you all do get successfully together, you're pushing up daisies. The father, the son and the holy ghost, be with you...
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/7/2023 7:54:00 PM
thank you for the reply -
Date: 11/6/2023 8:47:00 PM
“eat our rage in small doses” ~ beautifully and artistically put, Mat. Enjoyed this powerful write
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/7/2023 7:55:00 PM
my gratitude
Date: 11/5/2023 5:50:00 AM
You've made it so poignant with this heartfelt wordplay, quite intriguing as well! The depth conveyed here really takes one on an introspective and melancholic ride.. Hued with vulnerability.. Loved reading this, absolutely.. Wonderfully crafted.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/6/2023 7:51:00 AM
much appreciated
Date: 11/4/2023 4:38:00 PM
Hmmm.... "eat our rage in small doses" very deep- and the way the poem rhymes; it's a lot said in a few lines.
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/4/2023 8:56:00 PM
thank you -
Date: 11/4/2023 4:47:00 AM
“Three caskets covered in roses” that line stood out for me really! Absolutely stunning and deeply moving poem, in few words you’ve expressed so much! Pleasure always reading your work
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/4/2023 8:57:00 PM
appreciate your thoughts as always -
Date: 11/3/2023 11:32:00 PM
don't quite understand it, but i can kinda see it, and i feel... sad
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Mat Ignacio
Date: 11/4/2023 8:58:00 PM
thank you for the reply