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Endless Walk

i walk the empty streets where have all the people gone perhaps they walk in different shoes and sing to different songs i walk the empty streets no cobblers do i see when first i came we all were game is anyone hearing me i walk the empty streets not even the rats retreat no sign or sound resound i find it quite profound this place it has no glory am i in purgatory should i be at heavens gate perhaps it is to late...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/11/2011 2:43:00 PM
The confusion is described so well, Sharon. It's hard to imagine "empty streets" such as those you describe. It's almost like something I once saw on Twilight Zone. You will find your way to heaven's gate, Sharon, but let's hope that we can have you here for many more years. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/11/2011 1:16:00 PM
Very deep write fro my Friday afternoon Shar.. hope all is well and I always enjoy your work as you know already.. luv Michael
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