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Encounter To Forget

After thirty stares, he walks to the lady to impress, being a hip hop guy he has recently not seen one this beautiful, confident, calm but not shy. She counters his marvelous lines with: "I'm fifty-one years old." and comforts him immediately with: "you're too young to be this bold." YOUR BEST QUATRAIN Poetry Contest by L MILTON HANKINS Published on the 8th. August. 2021

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Date: 11/7/2021 4:48:00 PM
A very clever and funny rendering of an idea. Perfectly laid out. Great job Funom!...ab
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/10/2021 10:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Anselmo
Date: 10/11/2021 7:54:00 PM
Hey Funom! A beautiful one on couplet. I absolutely love the title, the subtle sequence of the lines! Great pen!
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Funom Makama
Date: 11/10/2021 10:06:00 AM
Thank you so much Silpika

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