En Pointe

“EN POINTE” My Darlings, what a lovely way to pass the time “en pointe.” Arching your back, trying desperately to counterpoint the feet, The smile on your faces can not hide the pain of it all.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2011 9:54:00 PM

wow, this one is amazing. One of the very best I think I have seen!! (if for the contest, right?)

John Trusty
Date: 5/18/2011 6:21:00 AM

Hi Andrea, The very minute I put it in the contest the PS site went down and it locked up my computer. I sent a Soup Mail to the sponsor to verify it went in the contest, I just haven't heard back yet. I sure hope it made it in. Thanks for your impression of the effort. All the best JT

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/17/2011 12:47:00 PM

hahahah full of humor and wit, enjoyed En Pointe, John

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2011 11:38:00 AM

I am so pleased to have had the pleasure to read your awesome poetry this afternoon JT. Thank you for sharing it with us. Hoping you have a week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol