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Embarrassing Eclipse

Bypassing blue blushes pink as sizzling sun slides behind.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2018 5:22:00 PM

You used great alliteration, Jean. I am checking them all out again and saying congratulations.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/21/2018 5:31:00 PM

Thank you Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/21/2018 6:32:00 AM

- Congratulations, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 4/21/2018 11:16:00 AM

Thank you Sunshine.

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/21/2018 12:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Well done!

Jean Murray
Date: 4/21/2018 11:16:00 AM

Thank you Susan.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/9/2018 5:52:00 PM

Excellent Jean! It is multidimensional and possibly metaphorical simultaneously. : )

Jean Murray
Date: 4/9/2018 6:13:00 PM

Lovely to see you again Connie.Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/9/2018 1:26:00 AM

- Excellent words for this picture, Jean :) - Good luck in the contest - Happy Monday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 4/9/2018 2:55:00 AM

It is a happy Monday now I see you Sunshine.

Viv Wigley

Date: 4/8/2018 10:51:00 PM

Love it, Jean, hugely descriptive and all in one line. Cue applause (sound of chips frying)....... Viv x

Jean Murray
Date: 4/9/2018 2:52:00 AM

Is that what applaud sounds like? I never knew.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/8/2018 9:04:00 PM

Blue bushes have never made so much sense before this poem, Jean. Curiously, they make complete sense now. Sizzling sun, slides. Alliteration if you ask me. Pretty poetry, Jean. Nice!

Jean Murray
Date: 4/9/2018 2:51:00 AM

Thank you Caren. I have a one track mind.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2018 6:20:00 PM

Awesome!!!

Jean Murray
Date: 4/6/2018 6:55:00 PM

Thank you very much Andrea. Your praise means a lot to me.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/6/2018 8:34:00 AM

Nicely written Monoku, Jean, very well description of the photo. Good luck in the contest.. Hugs Eve ~`*

Jean Murray
Date: 4/6/2018 9:52:00 AM

Thank you Eve.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/6/2018 7:38:00 AM

You captured it well, Jean..a winning entry!

Jean Murray
Date: 4/6/2018 7:46:00 AM

Thank you as always.The poor moon will never capture the sun Vijay.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/6/2018 7:30:00 AM

I told you your muse would come out to play jean! Good luck in the contest this is a lovely line:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 4/6/2018 7:44:00 AM

Thank you Jan for your inspiration. I knew I wanted to do something about the colours blue and pink.