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Elvis' Last Moves

It’s a sad way to remember “Old Elvis,” a man who did more than most with his pelvis. Must have moved it to a feverous Las Vegas pitch, trying to move his last fried PB and banana samitch! The “KING” died on the throne!

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Date: 12/26/2012 6:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win in this contest John. Sorry I am so late with the congratulations. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/8/2012 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot John xx
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Date: 12/7/2012 10:23:00 PM
this is really good. One of the funniest ones in my opinion. I have read other clerihews of yours. You are GREAT with them. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/7/2012 8:35:00 PM
JOHN, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ON YOUR XOOL WINNING CLERIHEW... take care~LINDA
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Date: 12/7/2012 8:19:00 PM
Congrats On Your Win' nate
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Date: 1/28/2012 9:19:00 AM
congrats John on a wonderful win.. and a great subject in Elvis luv.. so glad to see u on winners list my friend..luv..
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Date: 1/27/2012 8:07:00 PM
Yours was sure one of the funniest. I could just picture that poor old Elvis doing that pelvic thrusting when his body was starting to go to pot. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/27/2012 8:42:00 AM
John congrats on your win..David
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Date: 1/27/2012 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Double Contest" John T. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/27/2012 1:02:00 AM
JOHN, CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win in my contest* hugs ;-)~p.d
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Date: 1/22/2012 9:39:00 AM
Thanks to all for the kind thoughts. I just started using this form and I'm having a lot of fun with it. I'm thinking of posting a "HEW" a day, starting today. Thank you all and stay tuned! JT
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Date: 1/21/2012 11:34:00 PM
John, I have a double contest... I would like to see you enter in my battle of the CLERIHEW... this is a very good one.. sadly.. but good..always,..p.d.
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Date: 1/22/2012 9:42:00 AM
I'm all in for this. Thanks p.d. for the heads up. Check my comment above. JT
Date: 1/21/2012 5:28:00 PM
hahaha. I LOVE this one, john!!!
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Date: 1/21/2012 3:10:00 PM
John only thing I can say is, bless my soul.uhu am all shook up..David
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Date: 1/21/2012 2:45:00 PM
lol John. Nothing I can add to this one. Well done.
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Date: 1/21/2012 1:28:00 PM
Yes,the KING died on the throne!!!Agree with you John. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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