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I know this isn't very elfy but I'm quite pleased with my little (s)elf as this contest was very unusual. I did date a guy that liked Warhammer for 5 years but I didn't glean anything other than some dice have more than 6 sides... shame. Clearly my several hours in several pubs last night has contributed though, as has my liking for beer festivals
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Their world at war, they close their eyes Elfin drinkers drink as armies rise To know their views I ask a question Blinkered, they deny suggestion That lives will change as fighters fight They sing and dance into the night They rest in glow of tavern's light Forgetting the world and all it's blight The only thing they wish to discuss Is competing ales, surely treasonous But I'm here now, let's not make a fuss So I drank some beers, and those beers were thus: A ruby mild - fruity and sweet My troubles mellowed despite defeat I forgot the carnage out in the street Safely ensconced on comfy seat A best bitter, the brewers pride Tavern next door looked on green eyed The sounds subdued, didn't look outside As aware of beers I'd not yet tried Stormy stout, so dark and true I watched it swirl as death toll grew As all around shared hazy view And talk of war here was taboo A summer ale, now there's a thing Far too tart with lemony zing This tavern I'm not worshipping "Show me the way to go home" I sing But as I exit all again becomes clear I remember why I travelled here It was to understand war, not drink beer This is their way to make horrors of war disappear...

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Date: 11/19/2023 5:58:00 PM
Congrats on 3rd place through this seasonal stroll of beers! You nailed it with regards to what I was looking for. The only things that beat you were more dark journalistic anderson coopery stuff that I didn't see coming. Great job!
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Date: 11/19/2023 10:56:00 PM
Thanks Matt - beer is more my forte, so I'm pleased I still placed without needing to venture outside - thank you for the feedback and placement. Glad your contest got you what you were looking for with an idea you'd had a while, kind regards
Date: 11/5/2023 1:32:00 AM
This has to be a winner. Its brilliant ! Congrats in advance !!!!!
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Date: 11/5/2023 2:24:00 AM
I was pleased how this turned out considering the prompt was so specific. I'm not short on beer knowledge to draw upon. Thanks for coming back to this one x

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