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Elephant Dreams

Afternoon of elephants, scent of hibiscus within this fantasy spawned from television. They stand in their majesty meeting head to head, trunk caressing trunk. Sisters in a loving pose while the newest member of the pack troops under their bellies weaving between giant legs and toes that everybody knows look like buttes in Arizona. Suddenly, the baby darts away to run Chaplinesque with flapping ears and wagging tail after an intruding crane. And not too long after, the sisters move from their awe-inspiring embrace into a dusty mist.

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Date: 1/12/2010 3:31:00 PM
Elephants are such lovely creations.. so interesting to watch and their loyalty to each other is magnificent.. thankxxx for your extremely wonderful comment on my poetry tonight.. I wrote from experience and I also have a gorgeous son from this romance who is a joy in my life with his outstanding handsomeness and courteous and polite ways... I appreciate u sharing your story with me.. I wrote that poem 28 years ago.. thats how old my son is... thankxxx.. luv.. LMB am on Jury Duty this week...
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Date: 1/5/2010 8:16:00 PM
Very excellent. I can really see the elephants and picture this dream. You have a wonderful talent.
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Date: 1/5/2010 6:24:00 PM
This is quite a visual. Love the part about their size, like the buttes of Arizona, and the cute picture of the baby with flapping ears running away! Luv, andrea
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