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Element Water

It took place shortly after and the stage was set before words before ink before heavenly breath There was a rain on the parade of eternal monotony and the angels were elated In the Beginning God created... the verse everyone knows tantalizing phrasing that leaves you on your tip-toes before grass before plants before earthly foes And the earth was without form... (and talk about void!) It was there when it was all lightning and storm: chaos untamed in watery upheaval, though the celestial walls were impermeable Enough disarray to make a grown man weep And darkness was over the surface of the deep... It was there before it was given the title: Sea Before light was birthed with a "Let there be" Blanketing the earth with cerulean comfort in preparation for ethereal tickles, despair happy to take her wings And the Spirit of God was hovering... Like a golden eagle dipping down into azure pools knowing mountains will soon rise from your depths ... but LOVE is the requisite ... and HOPE is the heart of it Just like the weather that's about to hit the scene, before Pangaea performs in emerald green ... and there was morning the Second Day Can you not hear your doubts just wash away? ---remember what happened on the Third? I'm sure you do--- As you see Him reaching down with liquid love for you, longing to invigorate your being He wants to split you in half as the Rod of Moshe made watery walls of crystallization He longs to enter into your towering trust (and not just on occasion) For sometimes the Water of Life is dramatic Sometimes it's not And sometimes your fears could use a little irrigation (right now your eyes could use a bit of prayerful precipitation) Remember the ruby water that dripped down the Face of the Son that fateful day Drink it in Become full Indulge in humble hydration Your heart will tell you what you should And behold it was very good... NOTE: Moshe is the Hebrew rendering of the name Moses. Written April 2nd, 2016 For the Element Water Contest Hosted by Brian Davey Six Words Used: Impermeable, Requisite, Invigorate, Crystallization, Precipitation, Hydration

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Date: 5/9/2016 12:54:00 PM
Absolutely brilliant and beautiful. A great 7 for me friend.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2016 1:16:00 PM
Thanks Funom!
Date: 5/3/2016 12:34:00 PM
Excellent write Timothy. A very intelligent and well thought out write.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2016 1:11:00 PM
Thank you very much James!
Date: 4/27/2016 11:56:00 PM
Awesome Timothy, Congrats on your win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2016 12:58:00 PM
Thanks PD!
Date: 4/18/2016 3:18:00 PM
A very well deserved win, Timothy. I remember this is one i LOVED. Congrats on your win.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2016 12:47:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 4/18/2016 12:02:00 PM
Congrats Timothy to win on wonderful water. Anisha D
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2016 12:19:00 PM
Thanks Anisha!
Date: 4/17/2016 10:18:00 PM
Congrats on superb win with this exquisite write Timothy..
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2016 12:16:00 PM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 4/17/2016 8:11:00 PM
Oh Timothy, I am so happy to see this a top winner. I loved it as you know. Congratulations on this wonderful deserving win my friend! #7 :)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2016 12:13:00 PM
Thank you very much Connie! :)
Date: 4/17/2016 3:11:00 PM
I love how you wrote this, Timothy, in such a spiritual and mystical way. Congratulations on your fine win in the Element of Water contest! Sandra
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/12/2016 11:52:00 AM
Thank you Sandra for your insightful feedback! :)
Date: 4/17/2016 11:30:00 AM
Timothy, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/10/2016 8:58:00 PM
Thanks Laura!
Date: 4/17/2016 7:56:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/10/2016 8:45:00 PM
Thanks Barja!
Date: 4/17/2016 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations Timothy another great write in this elements series! Can't wait to read your final entry on fire, I'm sure your poem will heat things up!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/10/2016 8:42:00 PM
Thank you very much for my placement, Brian, I had a lot of fun! Not sure if your Fire contest is still going on or not (I probably missed it) ... :( Life gets in the way of Soup, at times ...
Date: 4/10/2016 8:37:00 PM
seeing another response you gave me to a comment I made. You gotta know, I only see those things when I can't find a poem of yours to read new. Then I end up reviewing older posts to see if I missed anything of yours. I gotta rush tonight so I can't think of where else to look . I wonder if I have seen all your poems!!!
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Date: 4/8/2016 9:41:00 AM
Prayerful precipitation,wow! humble hydration just great phraseology. Moshe you really like hebrew eh!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/10/2016 8:26:00 PM
I suppose so, my friend ... I'm a bit eccentric at times. Thanks for the read and the nice feedback :)
Date: 4/5/2016 5:06:00 PM
Wow Timothy this poem is stunningly beautiful!! A spiritual parting of the clouds...and let there be rain, the life giving source of all life! I loved this entry that is certain to end up on top of the winner's list! Bravo my friend! #7++ ; )
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/6/2016 2:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Connie! I find the first chapter of Genesis to be especially poetic in its language and meaning, and so I had a lot of fun incorporating and elaborating many of the verses into this poem.
Date: 4/5/2016 10:50:00 AM
This just might be your finest hour, to date. A Flood of Brilliance. (You could make a living off of this kind of writing you know)... J.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/6/2016 2:14:00 AM
I'm not sure what to say, but that sure is an uplifting comment, James! I haven't had the greatest luck trying to publish my longer poems (but have had some success with my smaller ones as well as one short story) ... So happy you enjoyed :D
Date: 4/3/2016 5:27:00 PM
I can't tell you how much I love this! The structure, the content the personality, all uniquely you!! Beautiful piece - inspiring and delightful to read. "Before light was birthed with a "Let there be" ~ nice line! Humble hydration... I like that! Very nicely done, Timothy. Adding to my favorites my friend! Needless to say this is a winner. Always, Laura
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/6/2016 12:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Laura! There is a lot of poetry in Genesis, and it got my mind going :)
Date: 4/3/2016 1:39:00 PM
Has anyone told you (again) that you're on a roll?! Richard says that you met this challenge with style...not just any style, but your own special style that is hard to imitate! Yes, I believe that many of us could use a little irrigation...even one like me who was born an Aquarian:) #7++ // paul [ps~Andrea will not have to eat her hat!]
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/6/2016 12:17:00 AM
I should hope so (eating hats aren't good on your teeth or your stomach!) ... you honor me yet again, Paul. I'm not sure why the words come to me in this fashion, but I'm always thankful for the chance to be inspired. I was born a Leo myself.
Date: 4/3/2016 12:15:00 PM
You are so amazing. ANOTHER poem I have to fave. Good heavens!! Talk about STYLE. Richard is right on that. If this does not win, I will have to eat my hat.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/6/2016 12:08:00 AM
I run out of things to say, Andrea ... THANK you yet again. I suppose I'm on a creative streak, but many of these lines were direct quotes from Genesis 1 ... it was about elaborating and intertwining my own thoughts with it.
Date: 4/3/2016 9:28:00 AM
You met this challenge with style!!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/5/2016 11:45:00 PM
Thanks Richard! :)
Date: 4/3/2016 8:27:00 AM
Another brilliant piece by you young man. I loved it...going to fav it so I can come back and enjoy it again
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/5/2016 7:30:00 PM
Thank you very much Tim. I'm glad you liked it! I enjoyed integrating some of the early verses from Genesis, as I find there's a lot of beautiful poetry in that book.
Date: 4/3/2016 8:24:00 AM
WOW I love your take on the theme Timothy - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/5/2016 6:50:00 PM
Thank you Jan!
Date: 4/3/2016 4:37:00 AM
This is too good Timothy! I predict this will be at the topx I loved it! #7++
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/5/2016 2:49:00 PM
Thanks Connie! Much appreciated :)

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