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Eggshells

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for some reason around your fortress you’ve built insurmountable blockades and from their safety you thrive on lashing out catapulting showers of fireballs and cannonballs it took a while for me to realize we were at war I simply didn’t know in hindsight it’s been going on for years but I really truly didn’t know I knew enough to keep my distance and stay out of the firing range you’ve always had me walking on eggshells why? I haven’t got a clue after all these years to tell the truth somewhere along the way I simply finally lost interest so keep doing what you’ve got to do and I’ll continue liking you the way you are the last of eggshell crumbs have turned to lovely sand and your fireballs now look to me like nothing less than fireworks display AP: Honorable Mention 2022, Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on June 16, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (JUN 17) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - 1ST PLACE 2021 Posted on June 7, 2021

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Date: 6/9/2021 2:18:00 AM
Great imagery, Line...
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Date: 6/9/2021 5:30:00 AM
Thank you, Supraja ~
Date: 6/8/2021 4:39:00 AM
A powerful poem, Line:)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/8/2021 5:06:00 AM
Thank you, Jo. Much appreciated ~
Date: 6/8/2021 2:42:00 AM
Love this... brilliant write. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 6/8/2021 5:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gina ~
Date: 6/7/2021 6:38:00 PM
Been there, done that))) Love the conclusion. In your honesty, you believed them! I get taken in easily....far too trusting, You’conclusion is superb Pangie xx
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Date: 6/7/2021 9:29:00 PM
Thank you, Panagiota ~
Date: 6/7/2021 6:28:00 PM
I think you show a healthy attitude in this poem Line, it takes a brave woman to see them as nothing more then shells, thank you for showing your strength, I admire that :)
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Date: 6/7/2021 9:29:00 PM
Thanks you, Mystic. Much appreciated ~
Date: 6/7/2021 6:27:00 PM
Interesting, dear friend!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/7/2021 9:29:00 PM
Thanks, Kim ~

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