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Egg Parade

Following a parade of painted eggs In zig zag blue, purple polka dots too! A flamboyant tap dance on happy legs Matching golden hues with Winnie the Pooh In zig zag blue, purple polka dots too! Piglet spins in Tigger's orange red spikes Matching golden hues with Winnie the Pooh Children colored bright, unique and alike Piglet spins in Tigger's orange red spikes A flamboyant tap dance on happy legs Children colored bright, unique and alike Following a parade of painted eggs 8/01/21 Pantoum Rhyme 1 contest Sponsor: Eve Roper Picture #4

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2021 11:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a fun write and "Egg Parade." Have a blessed day with your win...............

John Watt

Date: 8/17/2021 9:49:00 PM

This brings a smile for its childlike wonder, its splashes of color and of course, the Winnie the Pooh references. I especially enjoyed "A flamboyant tap dance on happy legs". A very pleasant and lighthearted reminiscence of a fun childhood activity.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/17/2021 10:17:00 AM

So fun Michelle! Congrats and kudos! Love your "egg parade" with its "tap dances on happy legs" and Piglet spins! Your lines are always so creative. They are a delightful source of motivation my friend. Happy egg dances to you. Stay cool over the next few days!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/16/2021 1:46:00 PM

A big CONGRATS on your win, Michelle. Janice

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/16/2021 9:17:00 AM

Great Work. Congratulations on your win!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 8/14/2021 11:40:00 AM

colorful piece, Michelle. Would never have thought to describe the eggs themselves. Nicely done.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/13/2021 8:35:00 PM

Michelle, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2021 4:43:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry. That would be some parade. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/8/2021 12:06:00 AM

LOVELY. All the best

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/2/2021 5:39:00 PM

Love this Michelle, takes me back a few years and more.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 8/2/2021 9:58:00 AM

Nice to see you are wearing your thinking cap again! Enjoyed!

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/2/2021 9:25:00 AM

WoW! Michelle, This is a good description of the photo. I found it to be fun and creative. It tapped into the kid in me. I enjoyed each line. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day and week:-) Alexis

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 8/2/2021 6:34:00 AM

WoW! Very creative interpretation of the pic. All the best for contest

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/1/2021 8:35:00 PM

Winnie the Pooh 'and Tigger too!' Kaleidoscopic cornucopia of colors. Brilliant pantoum! ~ Gershon

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/1/2021 5:10:00 PM

Michelle, you have said it brilliantly. In your writing, the photo's dynamic motions come to life in a bright and vivid way. You have a good chance of winning.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/1/2021 3:39:00 PM

Perfectly expressed, Michelle. The dynamic movements in the photo cheerfully and colorfully come alive in your write. A sure win for you.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/1/2021 3:36:00 PM

Ah, you made me want to turn myself into a painted egg, lol, I love your light hearted piece, gl in the contest dear Michelle :)