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Effervescence

A rainbow of flowers adorn her hair cascading an effervescence ~ to her being I feign fallen fast and drifting free in heartfelt fantasy night dawns as feeling fawns within the glow of the moon skies erupt   visions clear amongst the stars I swoon to her every hypnotic thrum ~ I awake gentle winds blow red campion dance seas remain a rare calm awash in her beauty reflections cast the way

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Date: 5/4/2018 6:07:00 PM
Well written Tim. Many nice lines in this :)
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Date: 5/3/2018 6:31:00 PM
So romantic, Tim...Very lovely. The imagery you created was thrilling here. Thanks for your visit to my tribute to Tim Ryerson. Much appreciated.
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Date: 5/2/2018 4:24:00 PM
Oh, to feel this type of love again! You are clearly taken with her, Tim, and describe her attributes beautifully. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 5/2/2018 1:32:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Very romantic write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/1/2018 3:47:00 PM
Beautiful, romantic, Tim, enjoyed reading. hugs
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Date: 5/1/2018 2:37:00 PM
- Sounds beautiful, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/1/2018 1:36:00 PM
Lovely musings, Tim
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