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Eclipsed

every now and then when heart ache laid, I fall apart, shattered in dark
... CayCay / Based on Bonnie Tyler's "Total Eclipse of the Heart" September 7, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/9/2019 10:43:00 AM
Your lines expectedly weigh in tonnes and your consistency has made you a master of masters in this act. This is beyond compliments. Good work mate. An absolute beauty.
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Date: 9/8/2019 12:51:00 PM
We all fall apart at times my dear dear friend and our heart thinks the ache will never go, everythings seems dark and unbearable, but being who you are, a strong, capable and loving human being, you will always get up and greet a new day with gusto! An amazing few words. Hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 9/8/2019 7:42:00 AM
Dark imagery...Nice one
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Date: 9/8/2019 12:56:00 AM
You are on a roll CayCay! Love what I am reading! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/7/2019 5:18:00 PM
Remember. It's not how many times you fall...but how many times you get up. Have a great day my friend.
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Date: 9/7/2019 2:59:00 PM
Woke up at 03:23 this morning upon hearing a woman sob, "Oh, mummy, PLEASE wake up". The dark does not conceal heart ache! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/7/2019 2:50:00 PM
I read this 3 times and each time it got deeper, great one! :)-luloo
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