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Early Morning Cat

A cat opened its eyes in the morning light, While other cats were fast asleep, And saw a bird high in soaring flight. And the ginger cat by the garden wall Hearing no sound, save its contented purr, Hardly bothered to stir at all. But the sound the awoken black cat heard Before that bird chorused spreading dawn Was the sound of the early morning bird Who, first to awake and swift to rise, Alone took advantage of the morning skies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/8/2021 1:50:00 PM
How fun!
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Date: 8/23/2019 12:32:00 AM
I enjoyed this entertaining poem about cats Barry. I am a cat lover too and I really miss having a cat. My daughter took her cat with her when she moved. I have had cats all of my life. I wish they lived longer as it devastates me to lose one. Thank you for the memories. : ) xxoo
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 8/23/2019 1:43:00 PM
Thank you, Connie. I used to have cats but sadly not any more. // Barry.
Date: 6/11/2019 7:44:00 AM
"Alone took advantage of the morning skies" , I dunno about the cat but I always feel like waking up early in the morning to enjoy the beauty and calmness of the nature like the morning birds do. But I'm just like a lazing cat. Fun to read this and enjoyed thoroughly. :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/12/2019 12:29:00 PM
Thank you for your comments Swetha. // Barry
Date: 6/10/2019 6:42:00 PM
...but did this early bird share the worms with the lazing cat??
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/11/2019 5:32:00 AM
Ha, ha. Not as far as I know John! // Barry.
Date: 6/10/2019 3:02:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem. Well done :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/11/2019 5:31:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. // Barry
Date: 6/10/2019 12:50:00 PM
Hello Barry Stebbings, When i have a cat she will be indoors, sleeping with me soundly like me. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/11/2019 10:37:00 AM
Did you get your cat as a kitten? Or is your cat an older cat? Male or female? I want to have a female cat one day. have a nice day my friend.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/11/2019 5:31:00 AM
Than you Darlene. Some cats will not stay indoors, they make a terrible row. // Barry
Date: 6/10/2019 11:47:00 AM
I wish they would open their beaks just a little later in the mornings ... and if I had a cat he would be indoors not hunting our little feathered friends:-( hugs Jan xx
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 6/11/2019 5:30:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. As a cat lover I have to defend the cat. Problem is there are too many of them. // Barry.

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